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Sir Thomas Lawrence ~ English Actor, John Philip Kemble as Hamlet in 1802
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Flights of Angels Sing Thee
The Soul is ever the castaway, adrift upon seas of troubles and fortune;
While pensive minds dare speculate in those undiscovered countries,
With tender hearts, aching for those travelers that have gone,
And for those earthly enterprises that have all turned awry.
While pensive minds dare speculate in those undiscovered countries,
Those dreaming realms where some find a dark and vast desolation,
While others find themselves in copious gardens of joy and noble delights.
With tender hearts, aching for those travelers that have gone,
And all that shall ever go, or go before us, into those unknown vales,
For the heart fears nothing more than, it does, the terror of oblivion.
And for those earthly enterprises that have all turned awry,
They ripple, a mere instant, in this furious river that is time.
Think, instead, upon those more splendid moments,
For these will resound, forever ~ in your eternal mind.
~ Mustafa Demiri
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This poem comes of two separate inspirations, one coming from having been introduced to the Trimeric form of poetry by Susan Budig, as this is her Mindful Poetry form of the month; And the other being the brilliantly written prompt and literary exercise supplied by Kimberly Blackadar, who is doing a marvelous job on Wednesday's Gather Writing Essential.
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Trimeric: Mindful Poetry's Form-of-the-Month for December, 2011
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Wednesday’s Prompt: Not to Be!
Write a response without any verbs of being and at least one allusion to Shakespeare. Post poetry, prose, a memoir, nonfiction, or an essay. (Due to the difficulty of writing without any verbs of being, consider a shorter response this week. Poetry, in truth, will be easier to write than prose.)
2. Post to Gather Writing Essential.
3. Tag your submission with WWE.
4. Include (Wednesday Writing Essential) as part of your title.
5. Make your submission(s) by next Tuesday afternoon.
6. There is a limit of three submissions from each member per day. If you’re extremely prolific, spread out your work and post only three submissions per day.
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Comments: 35
The part I played was only to point at the framework, Mustafa pounded the nails.
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Thanks for sharing with Surreal Circus
I really enjoyed this response: Your allusions from Hamlet's soliloquy flow seamlessly with your words. I spotted "sea of troubles" and "undiscovered countries," but since your poetic wordings match Shakespeare, there may be others.
Very nicely done. Thank you for your response to the WWE prompt.
The allusions in the body of the piece are all from that same soliloquy:
"seas of troubles" , "undiscovered country", "enterprises turned awry" using the term "traveler" for those dear departed souls, along with a few other terms... all, save for the title; This comes from Horatio's last words to his lord and friend.... "Good-night, Sweet Prince; And flights of angels sing thee to thy rest.
I do appreciate your comment, and, most of all, the excellent prompt.
Congratulations!
I do hope you have the time to view and comment on the other posts that are spotlighted.
Have a wonderful week.
You can wear the tights if you like, but I'll be doing more listening than watching.
Thanks for sharing with Gather's Best Writers and Artists. Now featured.
My admiration for your work grows ever more, Mustafa.
Thanks for sharing and submitting to
The Surreal Circus.