I was truly entranced by your poem! I received 11 broadcasts from gather about this poem, one broadcast per line, I thought. Nevertheless, every line is worth a 'broadcast'!
yes.. Chatrik.. i know my poems are gloom-faced but i m personally a very optimistic person... i have, just a little time back started appreciating the beauty sadness.. and some how it is more beautiful and easy to put into words....
I love the word play. My image might be different, but that is how good poetry is sometimes. I know many creative persons who produced great works while young but who now seen to have lost some of the fire that drove them in their younger years.
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i just checked my inbox... i am extremely sorry for so many of them...
Lost of self, loss of creativity
I love the word play. My image might be different, but that is how good poetry is sometimes. I know many creative persons who produced great works while young but who now seen to have lost some of the fire that drove them in their younger years.