Together Forever.

Together forever that’s what she
thought and maybe she said it too

you can’t recall it being such a while
ago but hey you loved her right even

if you never actually said so in so many
words at least not to her face not so she

could drink it in and set it amongst the
other dreams she had as a 14 year old girl

and what she thought of 14 year old you
you’ll never know now and she never said

at least not to your face not so you could
tuck it in with the dreams you had of being

a racing driver or movie star or some such
other but being together forever never

took off and maybe without answer just her
dying years later with cruel creeping cancer.

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Bernard C. Sep 6, 2011, 4:20am UTC

Quite the tribute piece and for being together forever but unfortunetly not in life - thanks for sharing :-)

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Terry Collett Sep 6, 2011, 4:40am UTC

thank you, Bernard.

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Darin Waugh Sep 6, 2011, 6:37am UTC

Nice!

Terry Collett Sep 6, 2011, 8:27am UTC

Thank you, Darin.

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Angela A. Sep 6, 2011, 10:18am UTC

That cancer, is sure is a blight on society.

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Terry Collett Sep 6, 2011, 11:07am UTC

Thank you, Angela.

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Barbara H. Sep 8, 2011, 11:10am UTC

...the world goes on and others do what they wish, in spite of what we do ourselves, and I've aalways thought that acting on what we want is many times okay because we never know what the future brings and we might lose the chance if we don't take it. Live...for others live and do what they will so we may as well while we can.

Terry Collett Sep 8, 2011, 12:22pm UTC

Thank you, Barbs, for reading & your thoughts and words

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Together Forever.

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