by Angela A.
Member since:
February 19, 2008

Prince Charming, not so charming Snow White says (Genre shorties week 74)

August 18, 2011 11:50 PM UTC
views: 0 | 13 people recommend this | comments: 30


Your story may be serious or lighthearted or as silly as you like just so long as it is 100 words or less and written for the following  prompt:

This week we'll write revisionist fiction. Choose one of the following fictional characters and write a new ending to his or her story. If possible, include the word, organic.



Scarlett O'Hara

Scrooge

Snow White

Romeo and Juliet



....Everyone thought that after the prince woke Snow White up from her nap, that she would be pleased and marry the fool. But, if anyone knew her well enough, would know it wasn't the case. The poor sap had bad breath, ending up loosing most of his hair, scratched himself, and belched a lot.

....So, after a very awkward few minutes, she declared herself a bigamist, you see, she had married the seven dwarfs, so she couldn't possibly take on one husband more.

....That sent the idiot scurrying away.

....Whew, disaster thwarted!

.....(92 words)







Comments: 30

Patricia J. Aug 19, 2011, 12:41am UTC
Was his given name, Marv? Snow White sure had her troubles didn't she?
Angela A. Aug 19, 2011, 1:24am UTC
Um, perhaps. Do I have to freeze you as well, eh? Ha, ha
Elsie Duggan Aug 19, 2011, 12:51am UTC
Got her out of that one didn't you Angela, :) , love it, love, Elsie
Angela A. Aug 19, 2011, 1:23am UTC
Yes, I'm a quick thinker.
Thanks
Bernard C. Aug 19, 2011, 5:37am UTC
Ever heard 'seven of the best' - a term used for a good ticking off at school - though this pertains to something else..there's one more in the picture..too many make a crowd..LOL - thanks for sharing :-)

Thanks for submitting to
The Surreal Circus.
Angela A. Aug 19, 2011, 10:12pm UTC
Had not heard of the term.
Thanks Bernard
JOHN BECK Aug 19, 2011, 7:45am UTC
I thought you were describing me, but I don't scratch myself.
Angela A. Aug 19, 2011, 10:10pm UTC
Oh, okay, sure, uh huh
Thanks
JOHN BECK Aug 19, 2011, 11:02pm UTC
You're certainly agreeable tonight, Angela.
Angela A. Aug 20, 2011, 7:32pm UTC
Yep, rightly so
A. F. Stewart Aug 19, 2011, 12:01pm UTC
A smart girl.
Angela A. Aug 19, 2011, 10:12pm UTC
Yep, she sure is.
Thanks
Kay M Aug 19, 2011, 12:16pm UTC
Wise decision. Now she can try for seven alimony checks.
Angela A. Aug 19, 2011, 10:23pm UTC
Yeah! Good idea.
Thanks
Chick J. Aug 19, 2011, 2:31pm UTC
She should have marry the prince. Then she could have Snow White The 8th.
Angela A. Aug 19, 2011, 10:19pm UTC
Nah, she had no life. She lied about being married to the seven dwarfs, just to get him to leave.
Kasey Klein Aug 19, 2011, 2:51pm UTC

Thanks for posting to Short Story and More!
Angela A. Aug 19, 2011, 10:16pm UTC
Thanks for stopping by Kasey
Terry M. Aug 22, 2011, 8:48pm UTC
This was good and made me laugh.
Angela A. Aug 23, 2011, 5:20pm UTC
Thank you, I'm very glad
G.M. Jackson Aug 24, 2011, 2:14am UTC
LOL! I like that ending! Quite a snow-white job.
Angela A. Aug 24, 2011, 7:37pm UTC
Thanks, she is quite the snow job lady
Barbary C. Aug 24, 2011, 9:11pm UTC
A modern woman, that Snow White girl.


Smiling at your inventiveness, Angela.
Angela A. Aug 25, 2011, 10:59am UTC
Thank you. She's very smart
Connie C. Aug 24, 2011, 9:36pm UTC
Angela,


I spotlighted a few of your posts in the Thursday edition of Today ON Gather.

You can view it here.

I hope things get better for you soon. Just wanted you to know I was thinking of you.
Angela A. Aug 25, 2011, 10:57am UTC
Thanks Connie
Len Maxwell Aug 26, 2011, 1:47pm UTC
I'm always jealous when I find someone writing stories that are as twisted as what I write.

Nicely done.
Angela A. Aug 26, 2011, 2:31pm UTC
Ha, ha!
Thanks Len
Love it Ang!
Hope things are going better for you :)

Hugs...
Angela A. Aug 29, 2011, 7:01pm UTC
Thanks for the love.
But, I am not doing so well, emotionally

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