Rapture

Rapture

let me slide inside -

savor every glistening glide -

the iron grasp

of your body on mine - I gasp –

as I fill you to the brim

savor every whim

and the heat and taste

of your lips that please

in every way -

whose sweetness beguiles

all the while

again and again, your body

blesses and imbues my own

with the greatest of pleasures known

between woman and man shared

together we soar

yet, rue the reality

that soon we must descend

to where mortals strive

but not yet

for now, alive,

we feel every heartbeat

each titillating temptation

of you and me

every breath on

kiss-dampened nipples felt

oh, so much wealth

of rapture to bequeath

before we must leave

Comments: 20

Barbara H. Aug 12, 2011, 6:15pm UTC

.....created with lustful taste! So alive!

stephen berwaldt Aug 13, 2011, 6:07pm UTC

I was inspired.

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Len Maxwell Aug 12, 2011, 6:31pm UTC

Very hot and, yet, tastefully done.

Thank you for sharing with The Triple Name Club.

stephen berwaldt Aug 13, 2011, 6:06pm UTC

Thank you Len.

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Robert - just a simple man - B. Aug 12, 2011, 7:38pm UTC

WOW.
(but wondering why you must leave, certainly she's worthy of an encore!)

stephen berwaldt Aug 13, 2011, 6:06pm UTC

I was describing the second encore already! :)

Robert - just a simple man - B. Aug 13, 2011, 10:47pm UTC

Shameless!

:+)

stephen berwaldt Aug 13, 2011, 11:00pm UTC

Grin...seriously...this is not real life confession...what good is a writer if he can't make a mountain out of a mole hill?

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Priya P. Aug 12, 2011, 7:53pm UTC

I think I understand ;)
Hot, sultry, passion filled verses.
Classic Stephen style!

stephen berwaldt Aug 13, 2011, 6:05pm UTC

I think you do.

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elizabeth evans Aug 12, 2011, 9:26pm UTC

Now this was HOT.

stephen berwaldt Aug 13, 2011, 6:05pm UTC

Funny, I thought it needed something...

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Bernard C. Aug 13, 2011, 1:11am UTC

Very sensual and descriptive piece - raptures indeed :-))

Thanks for submitting to
The Surreal Circus.

stephen berwaldt Aug 13, 2011, 6:04pm UTC

Thanks, Bernard.

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Diane Huizenga Aug 13, 2011, 1:30am UTC

wow time for a cold shower lol.

stephen berwaldt Aug 13, 2011, 6:04pm UTC

Cold showers work, as long as you take them alone.

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Ann Marcaida Aug 13, 2011, 12:46pm UTC

Thanks for sharing with Gather's Best Writers and Artists. Now featured, Cyrano.

stephen berwaldt Aug 13, 2011, 6:03pm UTC

I'll assume that was a positive comment... :)
Thanks for the feature, Ann.

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