You held my hand
the warmth between us spread
out upon the sheet
as the flicker of your warm, brown eyes
caught the flame
dripping to meet my flesh below you.
Waxing my tongue's taste of vanilla
scent upon us
beaming the Light between us spread
out upon the sheet
as the love I feel for you grows
the seed planted years ago
in a dream of the man
that might truly Master my desires.
We meet not only in passion,
there is a spirit that writhes within you
longing to be freed, endeared
as I lap up that which between us spread
out upon the sheet
I also know that desire is only the fruition
of the deeper knowing, longing I have for you
in your mind's intellect and prowess.
In this space
amongst words, silence and tender embraces
I feel between us spread
out upon the sheet
the very life blood I long to give-
from my heart to yours
my Love and care everlasting.
May our music's tune
reverberate within the nebulae
of the stars, the moon, the sea
the reeds, the grasses, the trees
around which between us spread
out upon the sheet
we are scrolled
as One.




Comments: 6
During the first read I nearly missed the 'form' you followed... THAT spoke well of YOUR style and strength. You overcame most of the rigors involved following someone else's direction of writing process.
I would really like to see how you would handle 'this' content in an unrestricted form... you have the emotional rapport to make this a most exceptional 'effort'.
Chris
Light,
Siddartha