A Journey Unknown - FWE - Your Fancy

He lifts me, as no other can and

Takes me to places still unspanned

With the kiss of his lips

And a promise of more

A magical adventure

never felt before

Is born from his touch

where his skin touches mine

As his kisses travel down my spine

Suddenly within me a burning fire

Has turned into a hot liquid desire

An explorative journey

Previously unknown

Breathing slows down

As his name I moan

What has he done, this magical man

He has lifted me as no other can

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Marie J. R. Apr 29, 2011, 5:37pm UTC

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Lucky, lucky Lady,,,

Priya P. Apr 30, 2011, 8:26am UTC

:) good morning and thank you

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Bernard C. Apr 29, 2011, 5:59pm UTC

Sounds like you found a match - well done - thanks for sharing :-)

Thanks for submitting to
The Surreal Circus.

Priya P. Apr 30, 2011, 8:27am UTC

Thanks bernard!

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Sandy Moore Apr 29, 2011, 7:01pm UTC

This is splendid. You have shared your feelings in a magical way. Way to go!

Priya P. Apr 30, 2011, 8:28am UTC

Good morning sandy, thank you

Sandy Moore Apr 30, 2011, 12:43pm UTC

Good morning, Priya. Are you having fun?

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Kasey Klein Apr 30, 2011, 3:57am UTC

Thanks for posting to Short Story and More!

Priya P. Apr 30, 2011, 8:30am UTC

Thanks kasey. Never told you before, but I looooove this picture of yours. Wonder what your other drawings are like.

Kasey Klein Apr 30, 2011, 12:34pm UTC

I like this artwork, too. When I get time, I'm going to give her a summer background.

My other work, for the most part, is astounding.

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A. F. Stewart Apr 30, 2011, 11:41am UTC

A wondeful, romantic poem.

Priya P. Apr 30, 2011, 11:44am UTC

Thank you very much. So very appreciated

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Bridget McNulty May 2, 2011, 8:52am UTC

Magic man with those magic hands :) A sensual sensation has traveled wide and far to reach me via Gather. Thanks for your post!

Priya P. May 4, 2011, 12:00am UTC

So very welcome :)

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Marianne K. May 3, 2011, 10:23pm UTC

WOW...such delicate PASSION from your romantic pen of beautiful poetry !!

You are blessed, Priya :)

xox

Priya P. May 4, 2011, 12:01am UTC

Indeed I am blessed in so many ways. You are sweet as always. I'm glad you enjoyed this.

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