“to a purpose born”
quench not this
burning need in me
under the same sun were we born to be,
both you and me...but
I am not like
other mortals made
xenolithic was I God-made
to stand my ground...to quest
of mundane things
no use have I
to tilt my lance
at fearsome foes...THAT man am I (don’t question why)
imbue me with
brave urgency
constrain me not
to turn and flee...COME...quest with me









Comments: 34
Thank you for reading...
Thanks for reading, at any rate
Contest Guidelines
2. Once you've submitted a particular poem, you may not change it. If you notice a problem such as spelling or the formatting didn't turn out as you'd anticipated, et al, let me know in the comment section of your poem.
Thanks for understanding.
This doesn't prevent your poem from appearing along with the others in the contest, but it does prevent your poem here from winning Poem-of-the-Day.
Sorry...
I'm sorry to hear that you'll be quiting your time with us.
Once the creativity has to take a back seat to the "rules", what have we gained? Nothing...we've lost. What difference if we correct a misspelling, or add a space where it should be...or forget to post the prompt of post the reason for our screw-up (which wasn’t mine, I willingly add) in the body of the poem or in the comment section? Does that diminish the impact of the words we write? We all know the prompt...that's why we're writing a rondeau, or whatever the form of the day is. I can understand a deadline, but “alas...you added a space to your words...DISQUALIFIED!” I don’t get that.
We write because we love to write, and that should be the criteria by which we are judged. I was not editing my poem, just trying to repair it to the extent that the Gather editing pane screwed it up. I added a note explaining that, but apparently not in the right place. Does any of this affect the poetry? No, it doesn't.
It’s the poetry that should be important to YOU as well. When one starts focusing on style over substance, how can anything we do transcend mediocrity.
It's all about the poetry, Susan...or it should be.
I am very disappointed...I expected more...
Thanks for submitting to
The Surreal Circus.
Thank you for participating in Mindful Poetry's Challenge Contest. Your acrostic is featured with the other acrostics submitted today.
Such words of noble gallantry,
And a call to benevolent errantry,
O knight of the beautiful reverie.
Now featured and with great honour and privilege at The Rogues Gallery.
Thank you so much for your exquisite praise...