by Jennifer Lee
Member since:
August 20, 2010

Meet Me Halfway Video and Poem

November 11, 2010 11:27 AM UTC (Updated: November 11, 2010 11:31 PM UTC)
views: 0 | 6 people recommend this | comments: 9

Times are changing

The colorless world rotates

Stars light the horizon

Birds chirp at sunrise

Yet everywhere I look

Everything I touch

All things I do; riding, eating or sleeping

I'm reminded of you

You had a large presence in my life

but one foot was in the door and one foot was out

Now you're half way home

Part of you has desire for me

Will you meet me halfway

Right at the borderline of your town and mine

We'll cross a bridge to the other side of the moon

Desperate for affection and attention

You're the only one on my mind

I remember how we did recline

I still think of you night and day

I pray that you'll meet me halfway

 

 

 

 

 





Comments: 9

JOHN BECK Nov 11, 2010, 11:44am UTC
Nice, Jennifer. In my opinion it would be even better without the line "I've spent time thinking about you". To me, that line dilutes the rest.
Jennifer Lee Nov 11, 2010, 11:31pm UTC
Thanks, John! Good call, I edited a tad and prefer it this way, too.
Angela A. Nov 11, 2010, 12:04pm UTC
How lovely!
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Jennifer Lee Nov 11, 2010, 11:32pm UTC
Thank you, Angel!
Sharon P. Nov 11, 2010, 1:55pm UTC
Suspended between hope and despair
We hang in air
Desire surmounts within
We await the joy of meeting, then..
Fear the sorrow of parting
Eternal human condition
We pray for reunion
Jennifer Lee Nov 11, 2010, 11:32pm UTC
So beautiful, thank you, Sharon! We said our peace and I'm relieved.
Bernard C. Nov 11, 2010, 2:10pm UTC
Think I've heard the song before - its a good gesture to be making - thanks for sharing :-)

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Jennifer Lee Nov 11, 2010, 11:33pm UTC
Thank you, Bernard! My gestures are not usually well received, but I never stop trying.
Bernard C. Nov 13, 2010, 11:56am UTC
Good for you :-))

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