by Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi'
Member since:
April 25, 2007

I feel you~

July 23, 2010 04:51 PM UTC
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On the boulevard of memories

Crossing a silent zone

A flock of white birds

Dropped feathers on my shoulder

Intermeaning the sequels of past.

  

I brushed them immediately

But one tiny quill got stuck in my collar

He was exquisite, soon he was rescued

Now he lives in my diary, forever

Each day his silver touch inspires my imagination.

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Comments: 52

RedBird. B. Jul 23, 2010, 5:42pm UTC
How Inspiring! I really like this! :)
Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Jul 23, 2010, 5:50pm UTC
Thanks,RedBird.
Dr. Ashok Saxena Jul 23, 2010, 7:34pm UTC
White birds are they doves. captivating imagery
Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Jul 24, 2010, 9:28pm UTC
Thanks,Papa.
Rebecca C. Jul 23, 2010, 8:39pm UTC
Beautiful. You have such talent Bhawana. =)
Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Jul 24, 2010, 9:29pm UTC
Hugging you,Rebecca..much thanks
JustMe ~I'm happy to be~ Jul 23, 2010, 8:51pm UTC
Divine poem.
Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Jul 24, 2010, 9:29pm UTC
Your icon is explaining what's divine..beautiful Justme
Renda B. Jul 23, 2010, 8:56pm UTC
Such sweet loveliness. Great write, Bhawana.
Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Jul 24, 2010, 9:30pm UTC
Thank you,Renda.,Your snippets are exclusive.I am in ,love with all of them,
Renda B. Jul 25, 2010, 4:53pm UTC
Ahhh, Bhawana. Thank you so much. I'm glad you like them.
JOHN BECK Jul 23, 2010, 9:15pm UTC
Line after line of delicate imagery and, well, Guy said it!
Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Jul 24, 2010, 9:30pm UTC
John,trust me this was written 1 year back.I wanted to edit it but dunno why I couldn't touch any corner.Thank you so much.
Larry H. Jul 23, 2010, 10:56pm UTC
thanks for sharing your poem..
Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Jul 24, 2010, 9:31pm UTC
Thanks,Larry
Sassy *bacon makes me happy* Cat Jul 23, 2010, 11:03pm UTC
simply beautiful!
Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Jul 24, 2010, 9:31pm UTC
Thanks,Sassy.
Kay M Jul 23, 2010, 11:25pm UTC
You have a beautiful imagination. You find poetry in everything.
Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Jul 24, 2010, 9:32pm UTC
You know me so well,Kay.Hugs
Marsha C. Jul 24, 2010, 12:12am UTC
sweet sentiments

Thanks for posting to Secret Sisters
Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Jul 24, 2010, 9:32pm UTC
Thanks,Marsha.
Angela A. Jul 24, 2010, 1:00am UTC
I love how you continue to place those cool animations along with your poem. That's so cool!

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Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Jul 24, 2010, 9:32pm UTC
Thanks Angela..love
Diane Huizenga Jul 24, 2010, 1:33am UTC
Beautiful
Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Jul 24, 2010, 9:33pm UTC
Thanks,Diane.
Ruthi C. Jul 24, 2010, 1:37am UTC
An aMUSEing and delightfully sentimental quill you have, Buhawana!
Ruthi C. Jul 24, 2010, 1:38am UTC
...smiles...
Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Jul 24, 2010, 9:33pm UTC
you were in my thoughts,Ruthi...much thanks for giving your precious time on ym work.Love and thank you
Ruthi C. Jul 24, 2010, 10:13pm UTC
Aww, you are sweet, and you are welcome..:-)
Kasey Klein Jul 24, 2010, 8:01am UTC
wonderful use of metaphor!

Thanks for posting to Short Story and More!
Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Jul 24, 2010, 9:34pm UTC
yours, Karl,
Have a nice one:)
Ann Marcaida Jul 24, 2010, 12:39pm UTC
What a sweet return to the days of quill-writing. Thanks for sharing with The Surreal Circus.
Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Jul 24, 2010, 9:34pm UTC
Those were the days when quill wrote romantic epics.Thanks,Ann.
Tina Coruth Jul 26, 2010, 11:05am UTC
Beautiful! I love this Bhawana!
Granny Janny Jul 27, 2010, 2:22am UTC
I love the overall feeling and effect of this poem. The word "intermeaning" has no meaning for me and so that line doesn't work. Also, how can a quill...have sex...as in "he"?
Still the poem moves me...
it was exquisite and soon was rescued
lives in my diary
each day that silver touch...
Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Jul 27, 2010, 2:25am UTC
Hi Jan, as said above to John,that I couldn't edit this poem but if you notice my tags.I was missing one old friend.Now only living in my diary.
Thank you so much for reading,Jan. hugs!
Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Jul 27, 2010, 2:27am UTC
I will revise this poem and will post again,Jan.
Granny Janny Jul 27, 2010, 2:34am UTC
Your are most welcome to delete my comments or to ask me to do so.
I love you and respect your artistic ability and sensitivity.
joleen Rodriguez Jul 27, 2010, 2:25am UTC
Very nice! I loved the use of metaphors! And the emotion! Very good!
Busy Buzzy Bee 'Gather Proud Mamarazzi' Jul 27, 2010, 2:26am UTC
Thanks,joleen.You have a great icon.
Donald M. Jul 27, 2010, 1:59pm UTC
Such a great article. Love the pen writing Hugs at the end.
beautiful prose Bhawana.....
thanks . . . . .
William Dotani Jul 27, 2010, 10:49pm UTC
You took a simple act of nature and turned it into inspiration.
Parul S. Feb 23, 2011, 12:35am UTC
beautiful and inspiring.....this one has bhawana written all over it...just so you.

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