Serenity

Serenity

A soft calm breeze blows tersely

teasing new blooms into dance

cool floats upon the air lingeringly

as lilies take a brand new stance.

The sweet music of a child’s laughter

playing in the yard is a dream escape

a bouquet picked from yard weeds

becomes a precious gift not to forsake.

Birds singing each their own melody

enticing the prospect of a new mate

such a show of brightly colored feathers

a true wonderment in which to partake.

The stillness of the day is quite amazing

not a soul rushing hurriedly to and fro

taking time to chat on the front porch

feeling a sense of unity flourish and grow.

So fleeting these moments of true peace

once the work week begins its demands

tucked away in heart are these memories

savoring serenity as equability commands.

Laura Abernathy April 18, 2010

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Visionaerie B. Apr 18, 2010, 11:26pm UTC

This is wonderful -- thanks for sharing it! And the weather is so nice it should inspire many more great poems!!

Laura Abernathy Apr 19, 2010, 8:46pm UTC

I am hoping to take a trip to the beach soon, will have to see what that produces. Thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment.

Debby C. Apr 19, 2010, 9:08pm UTC

that quiet possibly will produce tranquility and a rest for the weary soul..oh wait, that's when I go to the beach! LOL

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Gerald_Waving my Freak-flag High Brewster Apr 19, 2010, 1:19pm UTC

Delightful!

Laura Abernathy Apr 19, 2010, 8:49pm UTC

Thank You Gerald and thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment.

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Robert - just a simple man - B. Apr 19, 2010, 8:25pm UTC

Very beautufl word selection and the flow is gentle but great.

The Serene Laura Haiku
She dips her hot pen
In caramel cognac ink
And produces life

Laura Abernathy Apr 19, 2010, 8:37pm UTC

I am blushing now... you sure do know how to flatter a gal.

Robert - just a simple man - B. Apr 19, 2010, 9:22pm UTC

You'd blush if you knew all the special people I just pimped you to. Published authors, grand humanitarians, teachers, accomplished artists, humor columnist, and at least one very kindly grandmother....

About 80 all told, including that pretty little blonde called 'Kat' right down below....

Laura Abernathy Apr 20, 2010, 6:17pm UTC

Oh no, what have I gotten myself into!

Robert - just a simple man - B. Apr 21, 2010, 6:21am UTC

It's called "Gather' - LOL

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Kat Ballew Apr 19, 2010, 9:16pm UTC

These are words of calming peace as the seasons change and spring springs! Lol, really flows, good write Laura!

Robert - just a simple man - B. Apr 19, 2010, 9:23pm UTC

Kat, Laura says I know how to flatter a girl, you might want to set her straight (lol)

Kat Ballew Apr 19, 2010, 9:27pm UTC

HaHa, no Laura, you have a good friend when you have Robert as a friend, I know I do............He's the best!

BTW Robert, Laura and I are already acquainted! She does excellent work, I know I enjoy her writings.

Laura Abernathy Apr 20, 2010, 6:19pm UTC

Thank You Kat and I am quickly finding out that Robert is definitely someone anyone would be lucky to call friend.

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Laura Abernathy Apr 19, 2010, 9:20pm UTC

Thank You Kat and it is good to see you again.

Kat Ballew Apr 19, 2010, 9:27pm UTC

You too Laura!

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Elizabeth O. Apr 19, 2010, 9:35pm UTC

Very nice, Laura ~ Serenity...aaaahhh

Laura Abernathy Apr 20, 2010, 6:20pm UTC

Thank You Elizabeth both for the compliment and for stopping by to read and leave a comment.

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Kushal Poddar Apr 19, 2010, 10:17pm UTC

A distinct voice. Melodious. Beautiful.

rattled realizations

Laura Abernathy Apr 20, 2010, 6:34pm UTC

Your kind words raise my desire to write. Thank You

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Dianna Doles-Petry Apr 19, 2010, 10:18pm UTC

This is a beautiful writing and very peaceful. I'm so glad that Robert pimped you out to us so we could read your work. Welcome to Gather!

Laura Abernathy Apr 20, 2010, 6:36pm UTC

Thank You and to be quite honest I am glad he pimped me out as well, otherwise would not have been possible to meet so many kind and generous people so quickly.

Dianna Doles-Petry Apr 20, 2010, 8:30pm UTC

Just be glad it was only on Gather! :) There are a lot of wonderful people here on Gather and sometimes I get pulled away for days or weeks but I always find my way back here because of them.

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tame mainstay Apr 19, 2010, 11:32pm UTC

Laura, I'm so glad Robert gave you a shout-out. Thank you for giving us a drink of tranquility... tame

Laura Abernathy Apr 20, 2010, 6:37pm UTC

I is my pleasure tame and my hope to continuously fill your glass.

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Danielle P. Apr 20, 2010, 6:37am UTC

Robert is right this is a delight!!

Laura Abernathy Apr 20, 2010, 6:38pm UTC

I am glad you enjoyed it and am looking forward to seeing you again.

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Kasey Klein Apr 20, 2010, 11:34am UTC

A well drawn portrait.

Welcome.

Laura Abernathy Apr 20, 2010, 6:39pm UTC

I humbly bow before you delighted by your compliment and gratified by you welcome.

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Svetlana Goryacheva Apr 20, 2010, 1:52pm UTC

A lovely piece of poetry, dear Laura - truly enjoyable! :-)

Blessings and best wishes - S.

Laura Abernathy Apr 20, 2010, 6:45pm UTC

Thank You Svetlana I am pleased that you stopped by to read and comment and I appreciate the blessings and well wishes.

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John Philipp May 3, 2010, 10:09am UTC

Reading this was a delightful way to start the week, Laura.

Welcome to Gather, enjoy exploring and don't believe everything Robert says.

Laura Abernathy May 14, 2010, 12:04am UTC

Thank you John for both the comment and the advice (which I will be sure to keep in mind... lol)

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