by Virginia M.
Member since:
August 31, 2006

Take A Hike; Snippet One, Humor

April 16, 2010 11:35 AM UTC
views: 0 | 4 people recommend this | comments: 9

 

Flies buzzed

a mountain man

needing supplies.

 

Fifty miles,

the trek to mercantile.

 

Pinched nose

customers flee.

 

He's too late

in grabbing soap.

 

The shopkeeper gags,

“Take a hike!”

Comments: 9

René Allen Apr 16, 2010, 12:20pm UTC
Ahahh! ~ I started coughing after reading this ~ hahah!

This was FUNNY.

Viriginia ~ This is a perfect "29" STINKING~MOUNTAIN~MAN~HUMOR~Style Snippet!

Your Snippet has been entered into Our 7th Snippets CHALLENGE on the topic of "Take a Hike!" in the HUMOR area.

Good job!

Snippets ~ "Where WE WRITE in "30" words or less, and delete the rest!"
Nancy Paoletti Apr 16, 2010, 2:31pm UTC
ohmy!
Diane H. Apr 16, 2010, 8:34pm UTC
I can smell him, LOL
Renda B. Apr 16, 2010, 9:58pm UTC
AHAHAHA. Great take on the challenge.
Liz H. Apr 16, 2010, 11:17pm UTC
This truly made me laugh out loud!
Ruthi C. Apr 17, 2010, 3:00pm UTC
Oh, this has a very fresh scent..:-)
Angela A. Apr 21, 2010, 12:15pm UTC
He, he! Good one.
Sheila Deeth Apr 21, 2010, 9:05pm UTC
Oh dear!

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