by Carol Keefer
Member since:
July 26, 2008

"Great Light" - a cinquain

April 06, 2010 11:24 AM UTC (Updated: April 15, 2010 02:44 PM UTC)
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Great Light

Of Jehovah

That lights every person,

Move upon the water’s surface,

Make way.

Comments: 2

Susan Budig - Mindful Poet Apr 7, 2010, 12:31am UTC
The directive at the end--challenging. Makes me think of John the Baptist.
Charli Mills Apr 7, 2010, 1:09am UTC
Light and water are powerful elements between earth and heaven, god and man. This cinquain has movement that reminds me of wind pushing up river. Thank you for posting!

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