The glue
Sticky
Stuck
Still moist
Pliable
Fragrant
There
That one
See it?
Kind of white in color
Roped
Like taffy
There
Between those souls
Between those sheets
Between those minds
Glue.
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Stirling D.
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September 12, 2006 Between Us
November 19, 2009 12:29 PM UTC
(Updated: November 20, 2009 08:12 AM UTC)
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The glue Sticky Stuck Still moist Pliable Fragrant
There That one See it?
Kind of white in color Roped Like taffy
There Between those souls Between those sheets Between those minds
Glue.
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Comments: 40
Thank you for sharing with Gather's Best.
Nice.
Falling in love has a lot to do with the MEETING
That special configuration of time and space
and receptive psyches.
It only happens when you least expect it
And are most ready.
Getting ready consists of getting
Totally involved in your own thing.
Digging on yourself,
Being in tune with the universe
And being very horny -- if you can dig it.
Least expecting consists of
Being perfectly happy and
At one with the moment --
Neither expecting nor fearing anything.
At this point, you are ready for the
MEETING
And it will flow along so smoothly
and just rightly
That you won't even notice til much later
Just how magical it was.
There is still plenty of good old-fashioned magic
about, if you can hitch onto it.
Magic is what love is all about
-- that cement that binds
Freely floating atoms or organisms
Against all logic.
The
MEETING
consists of you
And another
And everything around and about you
From the beginning of time until now
Which has been gathering forces
To bring you and that other together.
And you know each other without explanation.
And there is that special THERENESS
And you both have everything to say
And explore at once.
And it's so exciting
And you're on a cloud
Miles above the Earth
And Everything is somehow beautiful.
What happens next is up to you.
If you post it to me
Via Poet's Weekly Muse
The glue will ooze
The love does stay
Even when the body's away
But seriously, that Stones album, gawdalmighty, is the best they ever made! A real real classic! That classic and LONG guitar-sax tango at the end of "Can't You Hear Me Knocking" still takes my breath away... and I still can't play it with the same feel as magic-fingers Keith.
As for the poem, great bit of minimalist writing, Stirrrrrr! I'll come comment on it later ... in a short while, okay? Still trying to get under all the layers.
Then we began to float down and we had bodies again - and we would feel ourselves and say, "Oh, isn't this wonderful? Now I can talk."
The human experience ...