4th Snippets CHALLENGE on the topic of "Dinner for Two"Two Snippets of "30 words or less on the topic of "Dinner for Two"! ~
First Date
Roommates suggest a romantic restaurant.
No candles, no white linen.
Just family style eating on picnic tables.
You apologize after.
I didn’t notice the surroundings;
I was focusing on you.
©DYen 11/15/09






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This is a perfect "30" SURROUNDINGS~UNNOTICED~YOU~being~the~FOCUS~Style Snippet!
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