by Dawn K.
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May 21, 2009

Eternal Infusion

November 07, 2009 09:58 PM EST (Updated: November 16, 2009 12:22 AM EST)
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Eternal Infusion

Copyright ©2009 Dawn Kilby/Kushal Poddar



Unripened, apple: Past life; "I was indeed."
As Father Time grew older, a humble worm
came to admire the beauty.
In and out, within her heart of hearts,
ripe, she became; all the world to see.
Worm and apple become one; God eats
the fruit of love
and both burst into light.
Eternally infused together.

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Comments: 30

Kushal Poddar Nov 7, 2009, 10:00pm EST
Yes. Taste of apple lies with them who have tasted.


http://www.gather.com/viewArticle.action?articleId=281474977890478


flesh of an apple
Dawn K. Nov 7, 2009, 10:00pm EST
meooooow
Robert - just a simple man - B. Nov 7, 2009, 10:05pm EST
re: my brudder's comment. What? And?
Kushal Poddar Nov 7, 2009, 10:08pm EST
It is fine poetry. Say it brudder
Robert - just a simple man - B. Nov 7, 2009, 10:04pm EST
This is, perhaps, why I don't eat apples.

:+)
Dawn K. Nov 7, 2009, 10:08pm EST
=oD got vitamins, nutrients and good stuff oh my.
Kushal Poddar Nov 7, 2009, 10:09pm EST
I have set an apple orchard for you.

http://www.gather.com/viewArticle.action?articleId=281474977890478
Dawn K. Nov 7, 2009, 10:09pm EST
and the finest apples have been picked.
Robert - just a simple man - B. Nov 7, 2009, 10:29pm EST
"got vitamins, nutrients and good stuff oh my."

and apparently worms too.
Dawn K. Nov 8, 2009, 7:13pm EST
good worms
Georgiana S. Nov 7, 2009, 11:38pm EST
on the rocks!
Dawn K. Nov 8, 2009, 6:46am EST
sounds good =D
Ed Da Head Toker Nov 8, 2009, 5:55am EST
A good read. But I do not like becoming one with a worm by eating it.
Eucliffe L. Nov 8, 2009, 8:31am EST
you have penetrated the Kingdom ousting the serpent from THE ORCHARD
without freeing MAN.
Dawn K. Nov 8, 2009, 9:46am EST
thank you eucliffe
Erin O'Riordan Nov 8, 2009, 8:51am EST
Delicious metaphor, Dawn.
Johnice R. Nov 8, 2009, 9:14am EST
I totally agree Erin! :)

We live among the literal! :)
Dawn K. Nov 8, 2009, 9:46am EST
thank you erin and johnice!
Jennifer R. Nov 8, 2009, 10:50am EST
Wonderful perspective. Nicely done.

Thanks for posting to my group.
Dawn K. Nov 8, 2009, 11:37am EST
you're welcome jenni =)
Cheryl W. Nov 8, 2009, 11:34am EST
love this one, Dawn!
Dawn K. Nov 8, 2009, 11:37am EST
thank you cheryl
Jennifer Lee Nov 8, 2009, 12:42pm EST
You and Kushal make a great team!
Dawn K. Nov 8, 2009, 6:44pm EST
thanx butterfly!
Lee P. Nov 8, 2009, 4:27pm EST
Very nice. I think you enjoyed writing this one. Thanks for sharing.
Dawn K. Nov 8, 2009, 6:44pm EST
I did =D
Mark N. Nov 8, 2009, 6:14pm EST
Well done Dawn,
featured at Important Things
with many thanks
Mark
Dawn K. Nov 8, 2009, 6:44pm EST
thanx mark!
well combined~ =)
Thanks for posting to GutterGirls~

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