The Mystery of a Love Story

The Mystery of a Love Story

They only see her transparency

Care to unveil the meaning of desperate measures

Awaken the sweet mourning

Brown sugar deepens our thirst beneath the winter nights

Come slowly and pour your passion Right between my eyes

A whisper waited a lifetime to shout the truth,

The stars bright constantly

A velvet desire,

The wheels are turning

Waltzing inside the walls of her heart

Antagonizing melody bouncing inside my soul

A weary sensation as I let go your hand

The streets lights began to illuminate

Our bodies in motion at the end of lover’s lane

A forsaken desire feels the room with her aroma

Bringing me closer to the moonlight

My veins found themselves spellbound by the blood of our love

Suddenly the wind propel our senses closer to ecstasy

Inhale each moment frozen in time, surely destiny

Will send us on a swirling escape trying to capture

The Last kiss…until we meet again

Te Amo…

Comments: 19

Dawn (a kitty-kin on the wall) Nov 7, 2009, 9:13pm EST

"Waltzing inside the walls of her heart"

my fav. line.

Rony J. Nov 7, 2009, 9:14pm EST

Thank you Dawn
Blessings

Dawn (a kitty-kin on the wall) Nov 7, 2009, 9:15pm EST

God bless you.

Dawn (a kitty-kin on the wall) Nov 7, 2009, 9:16pm EST

or a tango with velvet thoughts of mango...

Rony J. Nov 7, 2009, 9:18pm EST

great line Dawn

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Dawn (a kitty-kin on the wall) Nov 7, 2009, 9:13pm EST

I love the feeling of a true love doing so.

Rony J. Nov 7, 2009, 9:18pm EST

True love brings memories

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Erin O'Riordan Nov 8, 2009, 1:59pm EST

"Brown sugar deepens our thirst beneath the winter nights" is my favorite line, though the whole thing is sheer beauty.

Rony J. Nov 8, 2009, 4:34pm EST

A erfect picture of a lost love, shewas radiant and with a vivid imagiantion
Thank you for your kind words
God Bless You

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Ruthe M. Nov 8, 2009, 4:46pm EST

Beautiful words, Rony. The heart definitely spoke through the pen.

Rony J. Nov 8, 2009, 9:18pm EST

Thank You Ruthe
God Bless You

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Adrian Eve Revenaugh Nov 8, 2009, 5:14pm EST

I'm reminded of an older era of popular passionate verse. The heat of long, summer nights and inexpensive gas with just the right radio station to match the mood.

Thanks for sharing with The Surreal Circus

Rony J. Nov 8, 2009, 9:21pm EST

The imagination willalways bring us back to those memories lock inside your heart .
Thank you for your kind words
Blessings

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Vinod Sailes Nov 8, 2009, 11:02pm EST

Great make Rony.

Rony J. Nov 9, 2009, 2:52am EST

Thank You Vinod
Blessings

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Dr. Erica Goodstone Nov 11, 2009, 5:12pm EST

"a swirling escape trying to capture

The Last kiss…until we meet again"

Ah, the memory of a lost love, a distant love, or one you are longing to see again.

Thanks for the lovely words.