These are my attempts at writting a short snippet of what happened today.
Snippet #! The Girl's View
Munch. Munch. Munch. I chew my delicious chocolate chip cookie. A grey squirrel comes by and says “What are you eating?” but since he cannot talk he just looks curiously on.
Snippet #2 The Squirrel's View
I was a round freshly baked cookie from the Subway Shop down the street.
I used to hang with my friends and not carring about everyone's feet.
There I sat waiting to be taken home to be ate.
When all of a sudden a lovely looking girl with a squirmish appeitite came and got me.
I sat in her book amongst three of my friends.
Until the next day, when she took me out of the warm bag into the cold world.
There she sat and ate me until I was share with the animal, The Squirrel.
The girl thought it was funny to be eat with a squirrel.
I did not think it was fun because my pieces lay in her and the squirrels stommach.
And even underneath the ground.
Snippet #4 What actually happened?
The grey squirrel scurries down from the big old oak tree and ventures near his unexpected quest. She sits quietly munching on what looks to be a tiny piece of bread or nut. The squirrel wanders if he could get a bite to eat? He looks nervously over to her. The girl throws a tinny morsel of chocolate chip cookie his way. The Squirrel nervous grabs the piece and decides that is very delicious.
Snippet #3 The Cookie's View
The squirrel scurries down the big brown oak tree.
He looks at his intended target.
There is a big chocolate chip cookie that the girl is eating.
MMMMmmmmmmmmmmm Yum I must taste this delicious treat.
He very carefully scurries over to the girl, for he does not want to attack by her.
“May I have a treat.” He seems to mutter with his cute squirrel chirps.
The girl sees him, thinks to herself, than throws him a tad bit of the delicious cookie.
The squirrel carefully takes the cookie eats a couple of bites than runs off to the tree.
Then the squirrel starts foraging again.
The girl throws him another tasty morsel of her cookie, and again this squirrel takes it.
The girl starts to think “hey I am having an awesome date here with a squirrel.
The girl musters her courage and calls the squirrel over for a tastier bigger bit.
The squirrel comes right up to her and grabs the bite out of her hand.
Then Whoosh the squirrel goes back to the tree, eats his morsel, and scurries away up the big oak tree.
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I got this cute little squirrel picture from http://www.bing.com/images/search?q=squirrel+eating&form=QBIR&qs=AS&pq=squirrel+eat#focal=a40ba3f630efe00cb816fd53b73762d0&furl=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.cityofrichfield.org%2FPublicSafety%2Fimages%2Fsquirrel_eating_sm.jpg
On 11/7/2009 at 11:03am
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People actually stopped and ask what I was doing and they thought it was cute too
there are so many points of view