by Sue Lee
Member since:
October 4, 2009

don't turn the light on!

November 07, 2009 03:11 AM EST
views: 24 | comments: 8

 

i share a bed within my head

with one that loves me best.

we hug and kiss in sublime bliss

these lovebirds in their nest!

 

we know that waking's in the making

and we must face the facts,

we are not lovers under cover

no matter what life lacks!

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Comments: 8

JOHN BECK Nov 7, 2009, 6:09am EST
A verse of longing, well written, Sue Lee.
Sue Lee Nov 7, 2009, 7:45am EST
thank you, John - and good morning!
Kushal Poddar Nov 7, 2009, 6:13am EST
The first line is amazing. The rest does not disappoint too. Good work.

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Sue Lee Nov 7, 2009, 7:45am EST
thanks, Kushal! Sometimes a line pops into your head and nags at you...
very well done
d d. Nov 7, 2009, 6:48am EST
very nice. thanks Sue
Sue Lee Nov 7, 2009, 7:46am EST
Thanks all. Just a thought I had while not sleeping in the middle of the night...
Richard Thuss Nov 7, 2009, 11:11am EST
Well written Sue, and I understand that process of waking at night with a thought you must write down.

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