The Encounter

The Encounter

Unconscious inside a dream

Clearly I saw a hand reaching for me

A tear force itself to my senses,

Pressing against the current

My lonely breath torn between

And illusions of a silhouetted walking on a dance of roses

Thinking of a dense reality

Bringing me back to the carousel of life

Tearing me apart was the last kiss of goodbye

Fearful for the two souls inside of me

I began to speak an ancient tongue

Revealing the fire inside of me, hear me loud and clear

The road has pull me back

Through a shower of darts fill with venom

Closely I laid my ear to the ground

Waiting for the typhoon of uncertainties

The silence whisper of melodies running through clouds

And then she stretch her hand of desire,

But my eyelid couldn’t see the beauty inside of her heart

I stood in silence facing and eloquent mirage

Waiting for my heart to beat again…

Comments: 22

Vinod Sailes Nov 7, 2009, 3:48am EST

Rony - Beautifully written poem starting with the dream which climaxes in to breath-taking encounter of an apparition - a beauty, to be precise.

Rony J. Nov 7, 2009, 4:09am EST

A forbidden fruit always comes when you least expected
Thank you Vinod
Blessings

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Robert - just a simple man - B. Nov 7, 2009, 4:04am EST

WOW. I have been there and just tonight I wrote of her - and she showed up on the thread. Maybe if I would have had this poem in my arsenal, it wouldn't have ended. Dude, this is exquisite.

If you're curious as to mine, it is here: So Divine

~

Rony J. Nov 7, 2009, 4:07am EST

Thank you so much dude
Blessings

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Dano C. Nov 7, 2009, 7:50am EST

What may seem to be two souls may be a shared experience? Waking breathless from the dream that is still fresh in memory? The hand that reaches out may be a presence unspoken? It has many allusions there. Great writing, once again.

Rony J. Nov 7, 2009, 10:16am EST

The battle inside between good and evil is fought each by many people trying to follow the path of rightousness so once again you can only wait for a merciful God

Thank you so much

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Dano C. Nov 7, 2009, 7:58am EST

There may be a journey that one may make that is important, but words may not convey some things. A sense of the sorrow of a loved one is natural to many. You seem to me to be very perceptive.

Rony J. Nov 7, 2009, 10:17am EST

Thank you Dano
God Bless You

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Sandi S. Nov 7, 2009, 9:05am EST

Incredible! WOW!

This line, "Fearful for the two souls inside of me" makes me think of a woman pregnant with twins. But... what did you mean?

Wow...

:)