by Janice F.
Member since:
September 2, 2009

Peace Becomes Me....abedcedarian....11/07/09

November 07, 2009 03:03 AM EST
views: 29 | rating: 10/10 (2 votes) | comments: 12

Absolute beauty carried diligently

Even for good humor

Invites joyous keeping

Leaving my nefarious oppression

Poet's quiet revelry stated today

Under various wonderful xanadus

Youthful zenaidura

© Janice Farnsworth 2009

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Comments: 12

JOHN BECK Nov 7, 2009, 6:13am EST
Youthful mourning doves! Unexpected last line.
Janice F. Nov 7, 2009, 5:43pm EST
Thank you John! I was hoping someone would catch that!
d d. Nov 7, 2009, 6:46am EST
very good Janice.
Janice F. Nov 7, 2009, 5:44pm EST
Thank you D.D.!
Len Maxwell Nov 7, 2009, 8:38am EST
Nice job. Unless someone has tried this, they can't appreciate the difficulty.
Janice F. Nov 7, 2009, 5:44pm EST
Thank you Len :) Difficult yes, but the result is refreshing and makes it worth it.
Richard Thuss Nov 7, 2009, 11:09am EST
Very Nice, for form of poetry that I find hard
Janice F. Nov 7, 2009, 5:45pm EST
Thank you Richard!
Barbara H. Nov 7, 2009, 1:40pm EST
Wow! Yes you do carry the beauty diligently. Lovely, lovely effort.
Janice F. Nov 7, 2009, 5:45pm EST
Thank you so much Barbara :) I hope you're having a beautiful day!
Ruthi C. Nov 7, 2009, 6:32pm EST
Excellent Janice, absolute beauty in your ABC's!
Janice F. Nov 8, 2009, 10:11pm EST
Thank you so much Ruthi!

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