by Hella K.
Member since:
October 16, 2009

Who Am I ?......Free-Write out of the blue ~

November 07, 2009 01:09 AM EST
views: 35 | rating: 10/10 (3 votes) | comments: 29


Do I love too much ?
Color the sky a deeper blue ?
The grass a brighter green ?
Fill the night with light ?
Command the sickness to flee ?
Death to depart ?
Put a halt to fierce storms ?
Claim the truth as my own ?

Do I love enough ?
Make the sun shine ?
Call forth the rain
Upon a drought ?
Turn bitter cold into sunshine ?
Tears to laughter ?
Grief to happiness ?

I am human, feeble and frail ~

Such power does not belong to me.

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Comments: 29

david f. Nov 7, 2009, 1:30am EST
so from the heart - very beautifully written.
Hella K. Nov 7, 2009, 1:47am EST
And you are so kind and generous ~ thank you for coming by, much appreciated :)
Janell R. Nov 7, 2009, 1:48am EST
You have more power than you give yourself credit for. ;-) I like this, Hella. Questions we all ask at one time or another.
Hella K. Nov 7, 2009, 2:13am EST
So you think the Force is with me ??

Yep, another lot of universal questions ~ thank you for kindness, Janell :)
Sandi S. Nov 7, 2009, 8:59am EST
The Force is totally with you!

:)
Janell R. Nov 7, 2009, 3:07pm EST
Of course.
Nancy Silveria Nov 12, 2009, 8:45pm EST
Oh Bella, I know of what you speak, but believe me when I tell you that you are a beautiful force onto yourself. The fact that you don't see it, makes you that much more beloved in my heart, angel. hugs
Janell R. Nov 12, 2009, 9:37pm EST
Agreed, Nancy.
Hella K. Nov 12, 2009, 9:46pm EST
An Angel ??? Where are my wings ???? I think there is power in being invisible as well ~

Yes, Nancy....we have been there !

Thank you for your kind words ~ (((hugs)))
Hella K. Nov 12, 2009, 9:47pm EST
Hello Janell ~ now there is an Angel if ever I saw one :)

XOXOX
Janell R. Nov 13, 2009, 10:14pm EST
That's so cute. ;-) Me an angel? Hee, hee.
Sandi S. Nov 7, 2009, 8:58am EST
This is exquisite, Hella!

But I have to disagree... you do color the sky a deeper blue, you do call rain upon the drought... you do many things like this. :) God uses you.

Blessings...
Hella K. Nov 7, 2009, 6:54pm EST
Hi Sandi ~ you gave me the first smile this morning !!

Thank you for your lovely comments...it reveals your heart and mind :)

Blessings to you.......
Kelly Kay Nov 7, 2009, 9:24am EST
You have power, don't let anyone bleed it from yo H.

Have you ever noticed when people who have something others want, they sometimes get bullied or ridiculed? Jealousy
Hella K. Nov 7, 2009, 6:58pm EST
Hi Kelly ~ I wear red to feel the power :) You are RED !

I don't cope well with conflict...getting upset is often more my own doing.

Thank you for always being so supportive of my 'foolish' sensitivities !
Kelly Kay Nov 8, 2009, 11:04pm EST
Being a genuine and passionate person is not foolish, 'tis the others that do the upsetting!
Hella K. Nov 8, 2009, 11:29pm EST
Well, I contribute to some extent...I don't like upsetting people either, I hurt when I have hurt them.

I hope they will forgive me ~
Barbra L. Nov 7, 2009, 9:25am EST
Color the sky a deeper blue ?
The grass a brighter green ?

Two questions that metaphorically represent your desire to see the best in people and things. A wonderful characteristic, Hella.
Hella K. Nov 7, 2009, 7:03pm EST
Thank you so much for your beautiful interpretation, Barbra !

Seeing the best in people often brings out the best in them....would you agree ?
Thank you for your faithful visits :)
Barbra L. Nov 7, 2009, 7:44pm EST
Yes, I would agree. The people who have the ability to see the best in us are the ones to whom we are the most drawn, for it is the best in us for which we most long for others to see.
Hella K. Nov 8, 2009, 12:13am EST
Absolutely, Barbra !!
You have the power to evoke emotion with your words.... you have the power to lighten someone's heart with your kindness.... being a caring person is very powerful indeed.:)
Hella K. Nov 12, 2009, 9:43pm EST
Ferosh...you are such a sweet and wise friend ~ I love you :)
your power is uniquely you~ you have the capacity to evoke feeling even in the hardest hearts and thickest minds~ like my own~
Hella K. Nov 11, 2009, 5:44pm EST
Your gentle and kind spirit is my inspiration to think and care like you do ~

Your humility is real ~

Thank you for coming by and always leaving such generous responses :)

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