Guards go down... - From My Ramblings...

Guards go down across the fence

Setting sun calls for rest

Bayonet look like trumpet

Uniforms transform body within

Sit down to break the bread

Voices unknown faded in sleep

You like me are

My eyes tell my disbelief

In light I wonder

Hues that may appear

If all the same shade are

How dull would the universe be

A heart, a pair of eyes

Feelings, love

Hunger and thirst

How different a human can be

Across the fence

When I dare to peek

I see no difference

Why there then structures exist

Comments: 4

Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Nov 6, 2009, 7:26pm EST

Nice write! :D

Satya Jell Nov 7, 2009, 12:07pm EST

Thanks Angel!

vivi emerson Nov 6, 2009, 9:08pm EST

Very good. The last lines are haunting. I thought about peace, war, superficial/false differences.

Satya Jell Nov 7, 2009, 12:08pm EST

Thanks Vivi. Liked how you put it, "superficial/false" differences. So true, differences are just that and nothing more.