thank you

it started out great

just me and you

then it joined in

you invited the army too

you left me alone

and i couldnt go

i didnt know what to do

and time went by slow

being young i got bored

wrong choices were made

we grew apart

and our relationship caved

but i want you to know

even through it all

that enjoy your friendship

and that your always there to call

i guess im looking for a word

maybe not one, but two

i dont know how to say it

just know i thank you

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Roger B. Nov 5, 2009, 11:44am EST

.......a little too "bitter-sweet" for the first post I read today Ash. I'll be back after a couple of coffees.

-R.

ashley y. Nov 6, 2009, 11:52am EST

ok roger. lol.

Roger B. Nov 6, 2009, 12:05pm EST

After reading your "Fort Hood" post today, this now makes more sense to me. Well written poetic story Ash.

-R.

ashley y. Nov 6, 2009, 3:45pm EST

thanks roger.

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George Shaw Nov 5, 2009, 12:42pm EST

I am afraid that those bitter sweet situations are all too plentiful today. I wish that I could think that was an exception. You write it very well, Ashley.

ashley y. Nov 6, 2009, 11:52am EST

thanks george.

Roger B. Nov 6, 2009, 4:30pm EST

That George Shaw is a pretty smart dude.

ashley y. Nov 7, 2009, 12:53am EST

ya i agree with you on that one.

George Shaw Nov 7, 2009, 1:13am EST

Careful, you two will make an old guy egotistical. LOL

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Marsha S. Nov 5, 2009, 8:06pm EST

I agree, this is probably too plentiful
nicely done

ashley y. Nov 6, 2009, 11:52am EST

thanks so much marsha.

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Elizabeth R. Nov 6, 2009, 3:29am EST

Well written, Ashley. This does happen often and it is so sad.

ashley y. Nov 6, 2009, 11:52am EST

that it is.

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DIANE D. Nov 6, 2009, 5:34am EST

Very well writen~

ashley y. Nov 6, 2009, 11:52am EST

thanks diane.

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Marilyn is looking for whatever there is. N. Nov 7, 2009, 11:19am EST

Ashley,
You wrote this so well and I do think that you (without knowing it, possibly?), wrote it for a few thousand people. I wish they could all read this.

Hugs,

M