by Robert - just a simple man - B.

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AT WAR / INNOCENT SOLDIER

November 04, 2009 04:00 PM EST

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AT WAR

Blood was shed

Tears were cried

Time stood still

Mother’s asked why

Soldiers trained

Soldiers died

To protect the dream

Of mom’s apple pie

Blood was shed

Tears were cried

INNOCENT SOLDIER

A rapidly raised flag

A call to arms

Seed of Patriotism

Placing you in harm

You always return

In body or spirit

We celebrate your life

Your freedom; we inherit

This coming Sunday 11.08.09, I will be delivering a special Veteran’s Day message and poem at Calvary Baptist Church, Le Roy, NY.

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vivi emerson Nov 4, 2009, 4:27pm EST

Strong and to the point. The second stanza of the second poem, particularly.

Thanks for reminding us that veterans day is not just a (rarely) paid holiday. Hope that your speech and poem go well.

Robert - just a simple man - B. Nov 4, 2009, 4:52pm EST

Thank you. I think they audio record the services, if so, I'll try to post it.

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Nora Davenport Nov 4, 2009, 4:29pm EST

Very powerful, elegant, and beautiful poems, Robert! Ah yes, and tears as well.........several of my family members served in the military..........I even had an uncle, who, during WW I, lied about his age because he wanted in so bad, so do something for his country..........he did get in, and, if I remember right, he was only 16 years old!!!!!! He was in WW I and always very proud of it!

Robert - just a simple man - B. Nov 4, 2009, 4:53pm EST

My dad lied on his age in WWII and my mom lost two brothers in action (one's my namesake) and another to his wounds years after returning home.

Randi Burnham-Brown Nov 4, 2009, 8:15pm EST

Hey Robert the other is my name sake. Did you forget Randy.
But I'm Randi

Robert - just a simple man - B. Nov 4, 2009, 8:33pm EST

I included Randy, I said two brothers killed in action.

Randi Burnham-Brown Nov 4, 2009, 8:34pm EST

But you forgot MEEEEEEEEEEEE

Robert - just a simple man - B. Nov 4, 2009, 9:23pm EST

Right? Like that's even possible.

Rory M. Nov 4, 2009, 9:27pm EST

Don't argue with your big sister, she can still twist your ear till you call for mommy!

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Kathryn E. Nov 4, 2009, 4:38pm EST

Featured in the Triple Name Club.

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Chris Brockman Nov 4, 2009, 4:43pm EST

A call to attention about the call to arms. Vivi said it well: "strong and to the point."

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Richard B. Nov 4, 2009, 5:10pm EST

yes, and thank you for the words

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Dano C. Nov 4, 2009, 5:15pm EST

Blood, sweat and tears, the cost of freedom.

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Amanda F. Nov 4, 2009, 6:01pm EST

I have to say for a second I almost cryed a little

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Jan S. Nov 4, 2009, 6:44pm EST

These are both very moving. Too many Americans do not appreciate the depth of the sacrifice offered on our behalf, not only by the troops, but by their families.

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Georgiana S. Nov 4, 2009, 7:10pm EST

What if they gave a war and nobody came?

Robert - just a simple man - B. Nov 4, 2009, 8:34pm EST

The ACLU would probably sue on behalf of the Undertaker's Union.

Robert - just a simple man - B. Nov 4, 2009, 8:36pm EST

But still it would be a nice war.

Georgiana S. Nov 4, 2009, 8:40pm EST

save the best war for the last war!

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Randi Burnham-Brown Nov 4, 2009, 8:16pm EST

Beautifully written. This is a holiday that is almost forgotten and one of the most important. We have it off but public school doesn't. Of course not they are to busy singing those Obama songs.

Rory M. Nov 4, 2009, 9:27pm EST

I'm sure they didn't have if off last year either.

Robert - just a simple man - B. Nov 4, 2009, 9:58pm EST

It's not too often a democrat makes me smile. You are a devil chief.

Rory M. Nov 6, 2009, 11:31pm EST

I'm no democrat. We don't have the Democratic Party north of the 49th, and I am a member of no political party.

Robert - just a simple man - B. Nov 6, 2009, 11:41pm EST

Goes to show you how much I know of Canadian politics.

But you still made me smile with that comeback.

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Dawn (a kitty-kin on the wall) Nov 4, 2009, 8:34pm EST

a celebration
from nation to nation
a soldier deserves.

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Dawn (a kitty-kin on the wall) Nov 4, 2009, 8:35pm EST

loved it robert =)

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Kris P. Nov 4, 2009, 8:35pm EST

Very touching poems Robert, I come from a military family. All of my uncles and my dad were veterans; two of my dad's brothers (twins), were killed at Pearl Harbor on the Oklahoma. I actually have their Purple Heart medals, I believe they were given to my dad because he had 30 years, combination Navy, Air Force and reserves.

Thank you for making a special tribute to our beloved veterans.

Robert - just a simple man - B. Nov 4, 2009, 8:38pm EST

We both lost two uncles then to KIA during that war. Blessings to you this evening pretty lady. Got anyone to snuggle with on that couch? Just asking; and I'll have lambrusco.

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Dawn (a kitty-kin on the wall) Nov 4, 2009, 8:57pm EST

well penned pea 1.

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Kushal Poddar Nov 4, 2009, 9:05pm EST

The second poetry tears my heart. Brilliant brother.'

postman revisited

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Rory M. Nov 4, 2009, 9:31pm EST

My grandfather was a veteran of World War I, injured and unable to work afterwards, died in his mid 50s of emphysema contracted from mustard gas. My father was a veteran of World War II, injured twice and suffered un disclosed psychological trauma I have yet to learn (and likely never will know) the extent of.

War, indeed, is hell. The least we owe to those who willingly go into it for our sake is to honour their service, honour their sacrifice, honour their memory. These poems help to do that. Nice job.

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Elizabeth R. Nov 4, 2009, 10:15pm EST

Powerful and heartfelt, Robert. Beautifully written, Robert.

Robert - just a simple man - B. Nov 4, 2009, 11:06pm EST

Thanks pretty lady. BTW, been admiring taht icon; stunning.

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Marilyn is looking for whatever there is. N. Nov 4, 2009, 10:34pm EST

So true, Robert, (I fixed one browser!), war is hell - my father and all of his brothers enlisted as soon as WWII began. They all lived, but my father was the only one that got sent right to the front lines - and was there the whole time. That's one subject you could never talk to him about. What it was like. Actually, I knew better than to mention the subject at all.

LY,

Mar~

Robert - just a simple man - B. Nov 4, 2009, 11:07pm EST

LY Too

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Cathi L. Nov 4, 2009, 11:01pm EST

Too many have died, Robert. Too many I knew, and too many I've never met before and will never have the opportunity. What you've written here truly is powerful. I would greatly appreciate it if you would add it to my group, Michael Yon Dispatches, and if you do get your message and poem recorded and upload it to Gather, I would dearly love it if you would add that to my group also. Thank you, thank you for remembering the fallen and helping others to remember.

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Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Nov 5, 2009, 1:07am EST

Robert,
Beautifully done!! Great way for remembering our American Hero's

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Larry J. Nov 5, 2009, 2:40am EST

Please don't forget those of us who never had the burden of combat. My dad was a gunnery instructor during WW II, teaching men how to defend themselves from the Flying Fortresses. I am sure many survived the war b/c of his instruction. My older brother served while we were still in Vietnam but managed to go to Alaska instead. I made a career of the Army and was a recruiter during the first Persian Gulf conflict--recruiting command wasn't releasing anyone, even those in critical skills. Their reason? "You are needed here to fill the ranks so we have people to send over." I am proud to have served, even though it cost me my health in another way. You are welcome! :)

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Vinod Sailes Nov 5, 2009, 5:00am EST

Robert - full of sentiments and as much excellence to be singing full of praise for the brave humans many of whom go unsung but get counted within the gates of heaven. Thanks for the post.

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Barbara B. Nov 5, 2009, 10:46am EST

Touching poems Robert, thank you. I always remember
Veterans Day..How could anyone forget ??
Hugs for Streaker n you, Barbie

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Kelly Kay Nov 5, 2009, 10:55am EST

Thank you Robert, too many are gone or injured for life. We should remember these men and women every day for their service to our country. I pray they can all come home soon

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Sharon P. Nov 5, 2009, 11:41am EST

Thanks Robert, God Bless and thank them all.

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Sandre M. Nov 5, 2009, 3:50pm EST

A lovely reminder of where our freedoms come from. Thanks for sharing it here.

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Angela A. Nov 5, 2009, 5:39pm EST

Very beautiful!

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amy r. Nov 5, 2009, 11:25pm EST

A beautiful read. Those dogs are so cute, I can not even stand it. I want to go out and get one now lol. Look at their little mini paws and baby dog heads, awwww.

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