by Dawn (a kitty-kin on the wall)
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May 21, 2009

Today's Forecast: November 3, 2009(snippet and butterfly cinquain)

November 03, 2009 08:57 PM EST (Updated: November 16, 2009 12:14 AM EST)
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Today's Forecast: November 3, 2009

Copyright ©2009 Dawn Kilby

 

Confused

are leafless trees

as Father Winter is

silenced; "What has happened today?"

Forecast:

warm, sunny weather rolled in fast

and everybody is quite gay.

Absentminded;

Seasons.

 

*One day it's winter weather, one day it's fall weather.

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Comments: 13

Barbara H. Nov 3, 2009, 8:59pm EST
Wonderful way to see it all. The color of the seasons: Absentminded!
Dawn (a kitty-kin on the wall) Nov 3, 2009, 9:00pm EST
thanx barbara =) the weather here is horrible. no wonder I stay sick with a cold.
Kushal Poddar Nov 3, 2009, 9:01pm EST
It knows its season and its writer knows how to write. A beautiful poem. amazing.


sun on the guard’s gun
Dawn (a kitty-kin on the wall) Nov 3, 2009, 9:02pm EST
meoooow...gettin' better I can feel.
David W. Nov 3, 2009, 9:04pm EST
Fine words. The seasons do change quicker each year. All my days are Fridays.
Dawn (a kitty-kin on the wall) Nov 3, 2009, 9:33pm EST
all my days are usually monday =D thank you david.
Alison H. Nov 3, 2009, 9:19pm EST
A lovely snipquain! Weather moods do affect our moods.
Dawn (a kitty-kin on the wall) Nov 3, 2009, 9:34pm EST
love that word! snipquain =D new word, yay. thank you alison, you're right.
Cheryl W. Nov 3, 2009, 10:19pm EST
Wonderful, Dawn!
Dawn (a kitty-kin on the wall) Nov 11, 2009, 10:24pm EST
thanx cheryl
Richard Lynn Livesay Nov 4, 2009, 12:08pm EST
You are....a time with words that fall like leaves and sadly wait until the freeze

A sign it is your season...a reason to celebrate your colorful poetic accumen.

a poet princess persists passionately...and is rewarded with praise!
Dawn (a kitty-kin on the wall) Nov 11, 2009, 10:24pm EST
thank you papa!
Ed Da Head Toker Nov 5, 2009, 11:21pm EST
a good read.

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