On a belief we don’t believe
Is this how you dream; with a horse waiting;
its nose flaring? All around, white softness
of Escallonia are really
the letters full of childhood’s misspelled words.
Last winter a moth had eaten away
your purple scurf ; the recession had the job.
You drew breath and flakes of white gushed inside.
With pale fists hidden inside the pockets
you walked to yet another golden liquid
and left drunk on a leafless street dying.
Is this how you still live near death in dreams;
lost under a belief which you don't, in truth,
believe? You live. I live. Then moments die.
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It never ends (ConcertII)
Concert begins; I see those feet aren’t
touching the ground; you of course are
more critical, measuring the notes.
It will not be proper now to draw
one’s attention to a grasshopper.
Is the music being played by it?
It lives on the same ground my feet
are not touching, now that music has
begun and a tiny grasshopper
can be the hidden conductor.
Later we return to home. Sleep drinks dreams.
We join works. A lonely field listens
to a trivial green grasshopper.
The torn tickets fly like its hushed notes.
=© 2009-Copyright reserved Kushal Poddar (reprinting is absolutely prohibited, without permission)


Comments: 96
on a belief we don’t believe
Where do the misspelled words of adulthood go? I have many. A depository would be nice.
Very talented young man.
Other than those typos I love these two...especially the second because of the music - both orchestral and natural. It could actually be one whole poem.
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its nose flaring?>
Wow, this is masterful imagery!
I fear that many a dream has galloped away in the past year.
I find the birds that twitter in the morning more to my liking than the grasshopper or crickets, but if I were in the country I wouldn't mind them either. I am growing tired, time to close my eyes and rest.
Goodnight
Michelle, as we all are, is capable of feeling, I don't think that's the rare part. The rare part is admitting we feel. No?
And yes, your words do make me feel. I have no problem admitting it.
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
As always, well written and thought provoking!
Please keep happy and cheerful. Enjoy the coolness of evening because I may even be packing homward. Just now I am doing overtime in the office and may push off as soon as the office closes.
Be happy I will be back for more news may be tomorrow. In fact I take time off during moments of break. Thanks dear - keep happy and cheerful as I said.
Thank you Ferosh.
Your poems are always so thought provoking.
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This was profound. Incredible, Poddar...
It never ends:
Nothing is trivial in your poems, Poddar. Even this grasshopper. Wonderful!
A gentle steed breathes the crisp morning air,
he shakes his head, he knows the way.
As the thunder booms, I have another.
One short of too many,
one to remember,
one to forget,
one for the road.
My eyes unclouded,
I watch the road,
far past the twilight,
chasing the mourning sun.
Thanks.
ordeals of the non-quitters
Poem 2: I agree that many things are trivial in grand scheme. I like your humility.
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ordeals of the non-quitters
You had to stop somewhere because this poem would have just become way too long. We all persist with ". . . beliefs that we don't believe". That is what psychologists call "Denial". It keeps us comfortable.
you made me think of my grasshopper named Hoppie that i created for a computer program. I think he would enjoy your concert II, too .. 10 Chirp, chirps!! O'Bardaire
Thanks.
ordeals of the non-quitters
The grasshopping singing. Is he dulicating the Little Mermaid's "Kiss the girl?" Or could he have another song in mind?
with many thanks Kushal
Mark
It's also dead skin so evokes an elderly arm
It slowed me down, it made my thoughts hirple
Your archaic English does my head harm!
I've asked Robbie Burns to let me use curple
To complete the backside of this poem with charm
Your turn to consult the dictionary, my friend...
In search of Meaningful Rhyme there is no end...