by Gwen K
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May 15, 2009

sad poem

October 27, 2009 01:49 PM EDT (Updated: October 27, 2009 02:16 PM EDT)
views: 161 | comments: 6

He seems so distant now.

Like we were never together.

Is he avoiding me?

Is there nothing

left to talk about.

Are we even

still friends.

 

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Comments: 6

Ruthi C. Oct 27, 2009, 2:52pm EDT
Unfortunately, lost love generally includes loss of a dear friend, at least that's been my experience, sadly so.
Richard B. Oct 27, 2009, 3:58pm EDT
Understanding others is not a science.

Also if one loves another at times it's best to just let them go their own way.

Hanging on to a thought of reality is at times just hanging on to a future nightmare.
vivi emerson Oct 27, 2009, 4:45pm EDT
I compliment you on the physical structure and rhythm. The shorter and shorter lines add a sense of desperation.
Ed Da Head Toker Oct 27, 2009, 5:25pm EDT
a good read, and a good structure as for rhyming.
Love from Darlene! Oct 27, 2009, 8:38pm EDT
Romantic differences!
I love reading your poems.
DIANE D. Nov 3, 2009, 10:35am EST
I really enjoyed this~

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