by Ferosh (Site Translator for LOLSPEAK)is O.
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March 25, 2009

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October 15, 2009 12:43 AM EDT
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My dream
My hand
Your hand
Fingers dovetailed
Levering every
Push and pull
On the slippery
Slope of
Us

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Comments: 95

Franklin Newman Oct 15, 2009, 12:46am EDT
Treacherous love. How exquisite.
Well, I suppose my post has a dual aspect.... initially, I meant for it to be read exactly how you took it... but close your eyes for a moment and think of clasped hands in the throes of passion.:) Sweaty, slippery passion.;) Push and pull....... you get it....

It means both.:)
Jan S. Oct 15, 2009, 12:49am EDT
Lovely words; very visual. Hold on tight and you'll make it through the hard times.
Thank you, Jan. You are correct in your interpretation, but there is a second layer to this poem, look at my comment to Franklin above yours.
Kathryn E. Oct 15, 2009, 12:55am EDT
treachery no one can resist for its sweet pull into hell.
And how...... lol
Sandre M. Oct 15, 2009, 1:06am EDT
Ah, lovely entanglement.
Yes..... yes...... it's lovely, isn't it?
Guy W. Oct 15, 2009, 1:20am EDT
Oooh, I love when it gets so hot you have to hang on.
I see which layer YOU interpreted. lol
Guy W. Oct 15, 2009, 1:40am EDT
Am I a slut?
Depends on your definition of 'slut'. Do you think I'M a slut for writing a post with an underlying sexual interpretation? lol If your answer is 'yes', then you know the answer to your own question.....

Now, if you had asked me, "Do you THINK I'm a slut?" I would have to tell you what MY definition of a 'slut' is, and then I would tell you that I do not know enough about you to make that sort of judgement, but then I would also be obliged to tell you that I like where this is going......GIGGITY!!!! lol
Guy W. Oct 15, 2009, 2:01am EDT
You said "underlying".
Having a dirty mind(which you obviously do, and I sincerely appreciate that. lol) does NOT make you a slut, I think it makes you human.... the fact that you openly express those types of thoughts might lend one to ASSUME you're a slut, and again, we'd have to determine(based on definition) whether being a slut is derogatory.... BUT, if I were to determine that you were indeed a slut(based on the fact you have a dirty mind), does this make you a bad person..... which is what I think your real question is? lol
If I were to deem you a 'slut', based on your 'mind in the gutter' approach, then I don't believe that makes you a bad person, it only makes you honest.:) And yes, I said 'underlying'.... teehee....

As for 'underlying', you can use your gutter imagination.:) And I'm sure you already have. lol
Guy W. Oct 15, 2009, 2:18am EDT
You're too kind.
I meant "slut" in the sense of someone who would zoom right past the deeper meaning and zero in on the hot steamy parts without a backward glance.

I'm a Buddhist, good and bad are dualistic constructs. What is, is.
Guy W. Oct 15, 2009, 2:20am EDT
I'm not a GutterGurl member for nothing.
Guy W. Oct 15, 2009, 2:30am EDT
Well, it's time to fais do-do, but let's do this again sometime. Just like a man to roll over and drift off, eh?
At least I won't have to smell you fart from here. lol Yes, fun indeed:) And I always request that other people get their heads out of the gutter so that I don't have to get out and go around. lol

Ta-ta for now......
Duality is necessary for a proper balance, in my opinion...... I judge you not, but I do think you're a slut. lol
Guy W. Oct 15, 2009, 11:23am EDT
I wear the yin-yang in my ear. Balance is the place we start from; balance is something we return to, not achieve by juggling dichotomies of 'good' and 'bad'.
Ferosh (Site Translator for LOLSPEAK)is O. Oct 15, 2009, 12:04pm EDT
You mean I'm doing it wrong? Crap......
Guy W. Oct 15, 2009, 12:44pm EDT
it's not easy to do that wrong. . . crap, that is.
Oh sure it is.... I have a knack for f***ing things up.... like I could dent a steel ball with a rubber hammer. lol
Guy W. Oct 15, 2009, 5:24pm EDT
No, there's no 'wrong', I'm just a t'ai chi type and we look at 'balance' like a watchmaker looks at 'movement'.
Whew.... I was worried. Thanks for letting me off the hook.
Guy W. Oct 15, 2009, 6:17pm EDT
Aww, I can't stand to see a beautiful woman's face tinged with worry.
What about a "take pity sakes on me" pout? lol
Guy W. Oct 15, 2009, 6:31pm EDT
Uh-oh, someone told you how to unbalance me, right?
The cute li'l pout always finds a weak spot.
*sticks bottom lip out, turns corners of mouth down, raises eyebrows innocently*

*blink..... blink...... blink.....*
*quivers lower lip, sniffles*
Guy W. Oct 15, 2009, 7:04pm EDT
Pony? Of course there's room in the garage for a pony.
Guy W. Oct 15, 2009, 7:05pm EDT
Way to work the eyelashes.
*bat, bat*
Guy W. Oct 19, 2009, 10:42am EDT
Going from blinking to batting is dangerous.
*wink*
Guy W. Oct 19, 2009, 3:55pm EDT
When Odin One-eye would turn his back, Loki would close one eye to mock him. It's where the 'wink' comes from.

;=)
Ferosh (Site Translator for LOLSPEAK)is O. Oct 20, 2009, 11:34pm EDT
I did not know that.... it has a bit of esoteric humor to it, and a dash of innocent meanness.... I like it.:)
Guy W. Oct 20, 2009, 11:46pm EDT
Makes it a little less sexy, though. :-/

Unless you find playful Norse jotun attractive.
Guy W. Oct 20, 2009, 11:46pm EDT
Ooo, I just noticed how hot that haiku beneath me is.
Ferosh (Site Translator for LOLSPEAK)is O. Oct 20, 2009, 11:53pm EDT
Well, it depends on whether you find a little bit of good-natured humor sexy...... which I do....
Ferosh (Site Translator for LOLSPEAK)is O. Oct 20, 2009, 11:54pm EDT
And thanks a ton for making me have to look up Norse jotun...... lol
Ferosh (Site Translator for LOLSPEAK)is O. Oct 20, 2009, 11:57pm EDT
Children from armpits?!?!?! I'd buy that for a dollar. lol BUT.... giants who exist to irritate the gods? You can't get much sexier than that..... Yeah.... I'm weird. lol
Ferosh (Site Translator for LOLSPEAK)is O. Oct 20, 2009, 11:58pm EDT
And the haiku.... yes... hot.... note replies to your following comments...
Guy W. Oct 21, 2009, 12:55am EDT
Could you tell the Norse were all destined to be Lutherans?
Stop it, you're making me laugh so hard I'm snorting... (yes, I snort)
Guy W. Oct 15, 2009, 1:26am EDT
Leg wrapped desperately
'Round mine, straining, quivering
Flexing, relenting.
Don't let go, or one of us is gonna fall off the bed with the next pull. lol
Guy W. Oct 15, 2009, 1:41am EDT
Yes, haiku practice can be dangerous. The way I play it, anyway.
Oh, pardon me.... I didn't realize it was a haiku, as I was pronouncing desperately with 3 syllables..... forgive me, I was out of rhythm...;)
Guy W. Oct 15, 2009, 2:14am EDT
I was counting "desperately" as 3 syllables, too. You did get light-headed.

Too many present participles. How's this?

"Leg wrapped desperately
'Round mine, straining, quivering
Finally, relents. "
Crap, I counted wrong.... I meant I counted 'desperately' as 4 syllables. lol

Nevermind... keep going. I've lost my head. lol
You know, there's 3 kinds of people in this world.......

~those who can count................. and those who can't~


lol
Guy W. Oct 15, 2009, 11:20am EDT
lol
Guy W. Oct 19, 2009, 10:43am EDT
Nice to think one can still cause a woman to count incorrectly.
Ferosh (Site Translator for LOLSPEAK)is O. Oct 20, 2009, 11:38pm EDT
I'm finding that as I get older it takes less and less to hinder my counting skills.... not to diminish your skills and talents, but let's just say we could flip a coin to determine what's causin' my lapse in mathematics.:) I mean, I'm not saying you're NOT causing me to count incorrectly.....
Guy W. Oct 20, 2009, 11:53pm EDT
Hey now.

Well, maybe I couldn't seduce Mina Einstein into forgetting the square root of pi, but a man has to have dreams.

I know what you mean though, once we reach a certain level of mathematical maturity, there are only two important quantities: enough, and not enough.
Ferosh (Site Translator for LOLSPEAK)is O. Oct 21, 2009, 12:00am EDT
Yes.... it either IS..... or it ISN'T..... and no amount of discrepancy or difference in between enuff or not enuff is going to matter ultimately when the question is..... "Why not?"
Guy W. Oct 21, 2009, 12:47am EDT
I love it when women get right to the point. Can I share one of the hottest propositions I ever got without being indiscreet? Sure, I can.
"Somethin' holdin' you back, Big Boy?"
Ba-doinngggg!! (It was one of those ba-doing moments, you know.)
I love it when people just inexplicably open up to me..... I attribute this phenomenon to people just looking for other people who will understand without judging..... I am non-judgmental... for those of you in question. lol

Guy.... never ever EVER be discreet, m'kay?
Guy W. Oct 21, 2009, 11:05am EDT
Oh, I just gravitate to people who don't have time to worry about what 'other people' think. Seriously, a lot of people talk like that, but you've got the 'tude that can't be faked.

Indiscreet, yes, but we don't kiss and tell.
amy r. Oct 15, 2009, 1:47am EDT
I like it.
:)
Linda T. Oct 15, 2009, 3:44am EDT
Two interesting layers! I have to admit to liking the erotic spin on it a bit more than the nice one.
After writing it, and then realizing the erotic aspect, I came to the same conclusion. lol
amy r. Oct 15, 2009, 10:22pm EDT
Lol very true.
delicately sharp~
Ferosh (Site Translator for LOLSPEAK)is O. Oct 15, 2009, 12:06pm EDT
Much like you:)
oooh~ =D
Mmmmm.:)
Thanks for posting to GutterGirls~
Kelly Kay Oct 15, 2009, 11:22am EDT
Fingers dovetailed, I love that =)
Ferosh (Site Translator for LOLSPEAK)is O. Oct 15, 2009, 12:06pm EDT
I was wondering who else would like that.:) Thank you.
Atticus *. Oct 15, 2009, 1:08pm EDT
Love it. Short, sweet, nice tension. I like the addition of "slippery slope" in this context it is very sensual and sexy.
I guess you can tell what I've been thinking about lately, huh? lol That's what it means when you write about it..... it means you aren't doing it. :)
Atticus *. Oct 15, 2009, 5:31pm EDT
I don't know I heard a survey that the number 1 thing people do after sex is get on their computers, meaning social networking - somebody is writing about it, maybe not while, but shortly after! :-)
I wish I could say that was true in my case. lol In my case, it's just wishful thinking.:)
Sharon P. Oct 15, 2009, 3:13pm EDT
Slippery joy.
WEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!! :)
René Allen Oct 15, 2009, 5:18pm EDT
Ferosh ~ This is truly beautifully written. It is a perfect "19" SLOPE~DREAM~Style Snippet.

Thank you for sharing this with us in Snippets ~ "Where WE WRITE in "30" words or less, and delete the rest."
Thank you Rene!!!!!
René Allen Oct 20, 2009, 7:40pm EDT
Keep writing Ferosh ~ because you have a HIGH CALLING for it!
Ferosh (Site Translator for LOLSPEAK)is O. Oct 20, 2009, 11:40pm EDT
Wow, what a compliment! I'm extremely humbled to receive such praise from you. You are one of the few people whose opinion I truly value.:)
Ann M. (Site Scryer) Oct 15, 2009, 6:22pm EDT
A perfect description on an erotic dream. (Mine, at any rate). The tension seems to be between the conscious and unconscious minds, both at work in the sleeper.

Thank you for posting to The Surreal Circus.
Ann M. (Site Scryer) Oct 15, 2009, 6:32pm EDT
You are now featured.
Yay! Thanks Ann!
Georgiana S. Oct 15, 2009, 7:58pm EDT
oh yes!
Ferosh (Site Translator for LOLSPEAK)is O. Oct 20, 2009, 11:41pm EDT
WEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! lol
Sandi S. Oct 16, 2009, 8:19pm EDT
Sweet and striking.
Ferosh (Site Translator for LOLSPEAK)is O. Oct 20, 2009, 11:41pm EDT
Does it put a smile on your face? I hope so..... it puts one on mine.:)

Thank you.....
Lewis (taking over Gather) K. Oct 17, 2009, 11:12pm EDT
This says a lot in so few words, Ferosh. Takes a refreshing dip into sensual waters...
Ferosh (Site Translator for LOLSPEAK)is O. Oct 20, 2009, 11:42pm EDT
Everyone needs a dip every now and then to refresh and rejuvenate, right? Thanks again for stopping by....
Sharon B. Oct 22, 2009, 7:10pm EDT
I have over 10,000 e-mails....so please bear with the generic comment... thanks for sharing

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