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A Soul Excuse

October 10, 2009 03:31 PM EDT (Updated: October 11, 2009 02:19 PM EDT)

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A Soul Excuse

Sorrow
not found
anticipation
loneliness
forgoes a shoulder
to cry on
never realizing
the yearning
of your tears
upon my skin
I'm here
turning to a man
for comfort
unlikely
my worthiness
subsides
as you look
away from me.

To Groups: WELL, HERE WE ALL ARE........NOW WHAT??, Thepoetscircle, The Wordman Thomas Has Spoken - All Poetry And Fiction Writing All The Time

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Purrrrrrrrrrr~Genki dashite~Nantoka naru-yo! S. Oct 10, 2009, 4:18pm EDT

you bring through the sorrow and the loneliness something fierce~ excellent

james laird Oct 10, 2009, 4:22pm EDT

Thank you,its just something i was feeling a couple days ago,but i'm okay now.

Purrrrrrrrrrr~Genki dashite~Nantoka naru-yo! S. Oct 10, 2009, 4:22pm EDT

sorries you were feeling down~glad to hear things are better~ =)

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Jennifer Lee Oct 11, 2009, 12:33am EDT

~Heart wrenching~ Well done, babe! I love you. xoxox

james laird Oct 11, 2009, 3:14am EDT

thank you babe,need to write more.

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regina guthrey Oct 11, 2009, 12:49am EDT

Nice

james laird Oct 11, 2009, 3:14am EDT

thank you

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