by Angel sent from God Secret Sisters
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FORBIDDEN FRUIT 2ndsequel PLEASE READ Contest is still on for sequel 3

October 08, 2009 08:22 PM EDT (Updated: December 01, 2009 12:40 PM EST)
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I just want to let everyone know the 2nd sequel to The Forbidden Fruit is
 
finished. It is being proof read !

I have found several comments that will be used in the 3rd and final sequel to
 
The Forbidden Fruit. So what I will do is pick the one closest to what was written
 
and then pick one out for the comment I really got a kick out of.
 
Keep up with the suggestions anyone can still win for the final sequel.
 
The 3rd will probably not come out till after Christmas Holidays I have a lot on
 
my plate as it is. I am trying to see if I can write a novel , wish me lucky and
 
pray I do not get discouraged and give up.
 
I want to thank all my Author friends who have helped me and still do , and all my
 
other friends too . Without you I would have never started writing again..I never
 
thought I would have my writings anywhere but my notebook and now they are
 
on the net....because of your kind words and encouragement .  I need it hubby is
 
not helping at all. :( but what spouses really do when they think its just a dream.
 
This is a start to my dream others are reading my work so right there, is part of my
 
dream come true.
 
Thank you all
 
Happy Holidays
 
Janet (aka. DoxieAngels)

 

 

For those who have not read it here is the first part :

Also I am having a hard time deciding how to handle sequel

two. So please bear with me...there will be some winners on part

two and part three so keep the ideas coming instead of doing

another posts for ideas just make them on here!

 



Adam and Eve-The Forbidden Fruit

Adam!

Yes Eve

Where are you?

I am Here Eve!

Where Adam I can not see you

I am by the light

Can you not see it....

Adam what light ....

All I see Adam is dark

I am cold too Adam...

Well Eve follow my voice

You will be very happy once

you are here......

Its so warm and the light is so

beautiful......

Adam I am following your voice

but I do not see the light .....

Adam I am scared ...

I am freezing Adam...

Eve .....

Yes Adam ....

Hurry ........I can not wait much longer...

Adam wait for me .....

Sorry Eve God said for me to follow his voice...

Bye Eve.......

 

Adam...

Where are you ......

 

Eve....

Adam.....

No Eve ......

Who are you......

Do you not remember me???

Remember you ......

Who are you.....

Let me remind you......

 

No ......it can not be......

Why have you come to me....

Eve you are now mine......

But it's not fair ......

What is not fair Eve.....

Why did God take Adam..

Adam ate from the forbidden tree too..

He ate the forbidden fruit.....

You betrade your husband..

He trusted you.....

That was the deal.....

Now you are mine ....

To be my bride......

To sit next to me in my kingdom.

No.....

God will save me....

Adam will make sure of that....

God will save you .....

To late for that.....

God forgave Adam....

Fool........

You are the one to blame....

Now all women in the world will suffer .....

Say good bye

And come with me to be my Bride....

 

@Jeanette Weter September 18 2009



Now that everyone has read it...this is what I propose for those who knew about my contest before that I gave for a prize was pens not just any pen. They are the ones from the drug makers that they can no longer give out . I have pens from Viagra you name I probably have it. I used to work for a major hospital in Detroit. I was the first person the drug reps seen, that meant I got the best items. Since I do not work there most my pens I got on eBay or traded with other professionals. I sell on eBay but have taken a break since our mishap of losing everything. So I have 100s of pens. I figured this would be a good idea to help someone else get a pen a collector pen and help me out with some good ideas how to handle.....our famous man ADAM.



So here is the deal with all the feedback that I received from the first post, Please tell me what do you want to happen to Adam does he get to stay in the light to go through the Pearly Gates of Heaven or What? Now You have to know something here Adam had made a Deal with the Devil !! If you give me ideas and or a line to use...and I use it in my post you will receive a pen.

There can be more than one winner...the winners will be posted at the end of the write giving that person the credit for it and which idea or/and line used.

If you are listed you must email me with your address where I can mail your pen to(Your address will not be given out to no one) I am not sure if I will pick out a pen or if I ll give you a choice do not know till after the contest is over.

The contest starts today last till Oct 31 09.

You do have to post your ideas separate since that does not generate more points for you nor I.  I do limit it to no more than 3 ideas in one post just for my old eyes sake. lol



Please have fun with it...if I need to Flag the sequel I will so I want it to be real fun and I do not mind if it gets a little risky.

Purrrr & Peter what ever~~~~{hugs} Nellie &Lori Like I said go for it {hugs} Do not be hurt if I did not mention your name here. Its just these ones have been my mentors..

 

Now this is open to anyone men or women I am not discrimating against anyone....its open for what ever.. but if its to much for me to handle I ll let you know

 Please help out a friend...check out this article !!

 

 http://www.gather.com/viewVideo.action?id=11821949021895303

Go for it!! I am waiting....

 

God bless You all

 

blessings to everyone

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Comments: 66 ( 1 removed by Angel sent from God Secret Sisters )

DIANE D. Oct 8, 2009, 9:07pm EDT
You have a great talent!~
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 9, 2009, 12:04am EDT
Thank you !! :D
Lionel LaVergne Oct 9, 2009, 8:20am EDT
I'm thankful Adam, my middle name, and Eve got together.
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 9, 2009, 12:23pm EDT
That s cool !!
Thank you !! We will see if they get back together..
Lionel LaVergne Oct 9, 2009, 2:06pm EDT
Well Angel, they had better. Because we wouldn't be talking otherwise.
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 9, 2009, 3:22pm EDT
Ok thats two so far that want the love birds back together.
I likey!~ =)
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 9, 2009, 12:24pm EDT
Purrr have any ideas what I need to do to Adam???
o cr**~ you went there~ lol
well~might I suggest the cheetah print *CENSORED* right up the ol apple core for perspective?~
well u did ask!~ =D
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 9, 2009, 3:22pm EDT
lol
Thanks for posting to GutterGirls~
Sherry J. Oct 9, 2009, 11:31am EDT
Very creative ideas, both the verse and the contest!
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 9, 2009, 12:23pm EDT
Thank you Sherry!!
Angela A. Oct 9, 2009, 12:49pm EDT
This poem is super awesome.
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 9, 2009, 3:20pm EDT
Thank you Angela : D
Lady of Lake Merritt =P Oct 9, 2009, 2:09pm EDT
Maybe adam says to the lord, but I can not let her go
as you have not let me go into the darkness
and he returns to her.... wishful thinking
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 9, 2009, 3:21pm EDT
Amy good idea we will see after the 30th to see the outcome..
*Carol ~Bronx Southern Belle D. Oct 9, 2009, 5:28pm EDT
The forbidden fruit was a fig. A fig I tell you, not an apple. Good job. Waiting for more.
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 10, 2009, 2:41pm EDT
Carol I did not mention an apple.....But no one knows for sure what type of fruit it was.. So did God tell you that secret?? We know it was not an apple..but if it was a fig I want to know where I can find that...since I am still learning....
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 10, 2009, 2:42pm EDT
I am waiting to see what should happen to Adam I asking for some thoughts on it...
Monique Mealue Oct 10, 2009, 1:29pm EDT
I enjoyed reading it! I gave you a 10!
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 10, 2009, 2:41pm EDT
Monique
Thank you
:D :D
Oh no (Censored), Adam made a deal but we know that kind doesn't keep their promises, he ate it too. Whatever it was, she might have asked him to, but he's no innocent. Off with his clothes and get his sorry (censored) punished too! They can be together again, miserably or not, he just screwed Eve over. The NERVE!

I love it.
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 10, 2009, 2:57pm EDT
Love it we will see the majority wants them back together.. but it may be a while before that may happen....
Barbara H. Oct 11, 2009, 2:23am EDT
Heaven is where everything is possible and since Adam loves Eve he will be permitted to bring her to Heaven. Love always wins over evil.
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 11, 2009, 2:49pm EDT
Thank you Barbara..
It looks like a few will be getting a prize for part 3 ..
We need some ideas for part 2
I do not want them together to soon ,, Adam does have to pay for what he did to Eve.. : D
Larry W. Oct 11, 2009, 1:27pm EDT
good job dear.
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 12, 2009, 10:03pm EDT
Thank Honey no input on what I should do with them....
Abby N. Oct 12, 2009, 11:40am EDT
Hmmm, I have to think about this. :)
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 12, 2009, 10:05pm EDT
Think of something good , they can not get back together just on the 2nd sequel.

Lionel LaVergne Oct 12, 2009, 1:56pm EDT
What did Adam do to Eve? Well here he was standing in front of the most perfect woman ever seen. He had just been married to her by God, so he did what comes naturally. That was not the sin, having sex. The sin was doing just the opposite of what God said to do. The type of fruit is unknown and not important. The act of consuming the fruit was the sin, because God had expressly told them not to do that. When I was catholic we were told that sex was the sin. Bulls---. The two were actually told by God to do it and have a lot of children and replenish the earth, The earth's population had been destroyed during the war between Michael and Lucifer. These were what we now call dinosaurs and other animals of that type. No people involved, just animals, the first people were Adam and Eve his lawfully wedded wife.
Sandi S. Oct 12, 2009, 2:16pm EDT
When I was catholic we were told that sex was the sin.


WHAT?? You're kidding!!!! Seriously?

But it doesn't even say that...

How bizarre.
Lionel LaVergne Oct 12, 2009, 2:27pm EDT
Also we had to be Christened at an early age. You see, sex had caused us to be born so naturally we were in a sinful state at birth. Somehow I was to blame because my Dad and Mon got it on. No, Sandi, not kidding.
Sandi S. Oct 12, 2009, 2:37pm EDT
How twisted... and sad. Not what God intended...imho... (that means "in my humble opinion" not "I'm a ho"...)
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 12, 2009, 10:07pm EDT
I was brought up Catholic and was even Confirmed Catholic...
Pre martial sex is a no no ... oh well I guess under the Catholic Law I am toast...
Sandi S. Oct 12, 2009, 2:11pm EDT
In the story he was standing right there when Eve took the fruit. He totally let her take the fall. Problem was neither one of them really trusted God. They thought he was holding out on them, so Eve ate first and then Adam. She didn't trick him. He knew where that fruit came from. He even saw the snake.

"...tell me what do you want to happen to Adam does he get to stay in the light to go through the Pearly Gates of Heaven or What? Now You have to know something here Adam had made a Deal with the Devil !!"

Someone should call Adam out on that!

Where is it going? Hmm... I think they should both be rescued and the deal should fall through, just because it can...
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 12, 2009, 10:09pm EDT
Ok keep the ideas coming....
Yes the 3 part will have them get together....I do not want Adam to get off that easy!! Come he ate the fruit too and he let his woman take the fall.
Lets make him sweat a little before he and Eve can have the great life they once had .
Lionel LaVergne Oct 14, 2009, 9:24am EDT
Thanks for clearing that, IMHO, up Sandi.
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 14, 2009, 1:12pm EDT
Lionel,
thanks for stopping by again... :D
hmmmmm..........
something to ponder........

I likey likey too.......
thanks Janet......
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 14, 2009, 10:35pm EDT
Randee
You must come up with something really good!! LOL
(Jasper,(Disciple for Christ. w. Oct 14, 2009, 10:34pm EDT
I think they got together out side of the Garden, for God banished them both from the garden, I think they were put out both at the same time, and if so, they never went back to what they were, Because God put a curse on them. Adam was work to make a living, and Eve had to go through the pain of child birth. If they went to heaven or not the bible don't say so either way. But this is my opinion only, I believe they did.
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 14, 2009, 10:41pm EDT
Jasper
I understand what you are saying.
But this tale is fiction!! So we are just having alittle fun with it..
But I do not want to ruin the ending since there will be 3 altogether.
They will be together....at the end that ways already decided by the majority.
I am sure some of yours will be used for sure ...You are on part of the line I was going. When we went to church the Sunday before last we were discussing this .. I am not really having to far off base!!
Eric Cabot Steed Oct 16, 2009, 7:12pm EDT
Interesting. Very Interesting. Is there room for Lilith in this tale ?
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 16, 2009, 11:30pm EDT
Well maybe !! Its up in the air!! We will see on the 31st who gets in!!!
Eric Cabot Steed Oct 16, 2009, 11:33pm EDT
I'll have to spend some time with this, in the meantime. Thanks ...
Gary (aka: William Pinn) J. Oct 19, 2009, 2:57pm EDT
I think I read a similar story in the Bible or something. You might check out the book of Genesis for some ideas for Adam. Maybe he could load animals on an Ark and take a 40 day and night vacation.
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 19, 2009, 3:08pm EDT
Gary
Thank you that sounds cool!! :D
Elizabeth R. Oct 20, 2009, 3:14am EDT
Great write, Janet. You are very talented.
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 20, 2009, 9:39am EDT
Elizabeth
Thank you now you have me blushing !! :D
RobbinLynn B. Oct 30, 2009, 9:11pm EDT
Janet, Hi! Very Creative.

Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Oct 31, 2009, 12:31am EDT
Robbin
Thank you so much . YOu can post your idea right on this post here.
The contest is open to anyone , Thanks for the friend invite.
RobbinLynn B. Oct 31, 2009, 10:12am EDT
Your Welcome! And I dd send you and Idea! :)
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Nov 1, 2009, 3:30pm EST
This is what is happening next : I am printing this article off I will go through the ideas.
I will pick the winners for the 2nd sequel, and write it,.may take me a few days the winners will be listed with the posting of the sequel.

Then the 3rd sequel I will take new Ideas plus I will keep in mind the other ideas too, So there probably several winners. When you see your name in the post email me your home address so that you may receive your prize in the mail.


Good Luck to everyone...... you can still and ideas on here for the 3rd sequel...
Darren ("Site Psychologist ") Lynn Nov 1, 2009, 5:36pm EST
Adam was lucky to have Eve in the first place. Some people I know need to eat some more of that fruit, as they seem to still be lacking in some fundamental knowledge....:)
Angela A. Nov 7, 2009, 11:57am EST
Hmm, I'm not quite sure what you should do for the next part. I'm struggling on my stories too.
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Nov 11, 2009, 12:14am EST
Angela
Thanks :D :D
Darin Waugh Nov 7, 2009, 1:31pm EST
Good thoughts everyone!
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Nov 11, 2009, 12:13am EST
Darin
Thanks for stopping by :D
Franklin Newman Nov 7, 2009, 2:38pm EST
New idea: Adam meets Lillith, and has an affair with her again.
Franklin Newman Nov 7, 2009, 2:39pm EST
In Jewish lore, Lillith was a spirit of sorts, and Adam's first wife. When she refused to submit anymore, she transformed into an evil spirit who vowed to destroy Adam's children. Thus she was well-feared. In the feminist movement, like Morgaine La Faye, Lillith was reclaimed and turned into a strong force of empowerment. But chthonian power is still dangerous.
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Nov 8, 2009, 3:31pm EST
I never heard of this but that probably because of my Catholic up bringing.
Good Idea
Angel sent from God Secret Sisters Nov 14, 2009, 9:11am EST
Iam still working on this everyone please be patient
Cherry Popsicle Dec 12, 2009, 11:25am EST
I think Adam should dangle his toes into the "dark side" of the pool if you catch my drift, it was BTW his choice to taste the forbidden so why be all good I want Adam to be BAD too and dangle, dangle, dangle :)
Cherry Popsicle Dec 12, 2009, 11:29am EST
I think deals should be made and broken with the bad dude, you know he is a bad guy so turn about is fair play! I think you should stretch it to it's limits and let them all get freaky too! I don't know just some ideas :) I'm a booger that way, I want to see you throw in some unexpected twist! I love it!!!
Love from Darlene! Dec 15, 2009, 12:03pm EST
I am happy I stopped by today, to read your writing. The good person in me wants Adam to go to heaven and the 'forbidden nature' in me wants Adam to learn a lesson and not suffer forever. I applaud your desire to follow your dream, LOVE!

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