by Debbie G.

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July 16, 2006

Haiku for Dan

October 01, 2009 10:52 PM EDT

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Mesmerizing touch

Newborn son's fingernail grasp

Translucent newness.

Tags: poem, poetry, for my son, writing from the heart, baby, children, haiku

To Groups: Poetry of peace and joy, Poet's Passion, Poetic expressions, Poets, New and Old

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Comments: 6

Wesley W. Oct 2, 2009, 5:09am EDT

Such sweet memories that invokes, my little girl is not a baby anymore but I can see those first few smiles like they happened last night. Thanks Debbie :).

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elizabeth e. Oct 2, 2009, 7:51am EDT

Wonderful...perfect description.

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Faith H. Oct 2, 2009, 11:06am EDT

A love song, indeed.

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Verie Sandborg Oct 2, 2009, 12:20pm EDT

With a few words, you've captured the amazement.

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Madame Donna C. Oct 3, 2009, 8:07pm EDT

Oh you said that so very well.

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Tory H. Oct 8, 2009, 8:56pm EDT

A very nice portrayal of new life.

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