by Dorothy H.
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October 10, 2007

A poem for my 3rd child

September 23, 2009 09:58 PM EDT
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Remember the day with fondness held, dearly in my heart,

A pea-sized being within me, precious love was from the start.

Entering the world face first, and willing to partake,

Of all the world might offer, for love and goodness sake.

 

Preciousness, a gift of love, and willingness to share,

With joy and laughter, gracious heart, and willingness to care.

My little Rosie Girl presents, to all the world in style,

My sleeping beauty, in all her being, her sweet blue Rosie smile.

Copyright2009

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Comments: 22

Sandi S. Sep 23, 2009, 9:59pm EDT
beautiful!
Dorothy H. Sep 24, 2009, 11:42pm EDT
Thanks Sandi!
Krystal Harwell Sep 23, 2009, 10:09pm EDT
very nicely written. thanks for sharing :)
Dorothy H. Sep 24, 2009, 11:42pm EDT
Thanks Crystal!
Linda T. Sep 23, 2009, 10:31pm EDT
This is a lovely way to honor your daughter's birth.
Dorothy H. Sep 24, 2009, 11:43pm EDT
Thanks Linda. I did write these poems for the kids birthdays, this year.
Deb J. Sep 24, 2009, 6:22am EDT
Very beautiful poem for your baby daughter.
Dorothy H. Sep 24, 2009, 11:43pm EDT
Thanks Deb!
Kelly M. Sep 24, 2009, 11:00pm EDT
beautiful!
Dorothy H. Sep 24, 2009, 11:44pm EDT
Thanks Kelly!
Lee P. Oct 4, 2009, 8:03pm EDT
How sweet. A poem from Mom for all time. Very nice.
Darin Waugh Oct 7, 2009, 1:55pm EDT
Nice!
Dorothy H. Oct 10, 2009, 5:46pm EDT
Thanks Darin!
DIANE D. Oct 11, 2009, 8:13pm EDT
This is a beautiful poem~
William Dotani Oct 23, 2009, 1:24am EDT
This is maternal and sweet.
Lady of Lake Merritt =P Oct 31, 2009, 5:45am EDT
BEAUTIFUL!
Elaine B. Oct 31, 2009, 1:35pm EDT
Beautiful
Danielle P. Nov 8, 2009, 7:42pm EST
Beautifully expressed!!
Howard C. Nov 11, 2009, 6:14am EST
Excellent poem and heartfelt expression!
Joe S. Nov 23, 2009, 10:28am EST
Terrific poem. I'll never forget the day mine were born. They are truly wonderful gifts.
Ruth MacGill Dec 8, 2009, 10:58pm EST
A lovely poem from the heart.
Rose T. Dec 23, 2009, 4:38am EST
I love you ode to the Lord for your precious gift!

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