Moments in my car poem

Moments in my car

Song playing on the radio

Making me want to be loved

Red truck, white coffee mug

Drinking and driving?

Moving at a slow speed

Down and up the hill

Streets need to be wider

So more people can go

Stop,

Construction

Orange not found in nature

Man is moving around

Green gone

Gary cement

Under the bridge where

Homeless used to live

Where are they now?

Fast food row

Bright colors saying look at me

Try me, Buy me

Up hill to home

Comments: 6

Kimber L. Sep 15, 2009, 12:19pm UTC

Nice poem -

you know you ARE loved right?

Lillith (it's a secret!) Sep 15, 2009, 1:25pm UTC

i like your poem. makes me think: where Have the homeless people gone? i know they're still there, but unseen... 10

ℐґṽїᾔℊ ϟᾔø⊥ρ☺¢к℮тṧ Sep 15, 2009, 2:17pm UTC

Very cool! ^_^ 10!

Ed Da Head Toker Sep 17, 2009, 3:12am UTC

nice poem