by Haim Kadman
Member since:
July 21, 2007

She

August 25, 2009 02:15 PM EDT (Updated: August 25, 2009 02:17 PM EDT)
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She has an eye

on the main chance,

my poker player.

she’s a great hand!

She sweeps the pot

with her hands,

and so gentle they are

A smile lights up on her lips,

enchanting, heart captivating

‘Are you out of dough?’

She asks so charmingly.

‘You may leave

for a short while

I’ll review the situation

Meanwhile,

and I do wish,

You know…

But go and fetch

a few more bob,’

‘Okay.’ I replied,

I’m on my way

A bank to rob.'



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Comments: 16

the allure lure~feminine hip twists with good mind~
captivating~
Haim Kadman Aug 26, 2009, 12:22pm EDT
Right you're dear Jewel, what wouldn't a man do for a woman?
David W. Aug 25, 2009, 3:21pm EDT
Neat word work.

"But go and fetch

a few more bob,’

‘Okay.’ I replied,

I’m on my way

A bank to rob."

They always want more.
Haim Kadman Aug 26, 2009, 12:23pm EDT
But most of the time they're right... Thanks dear David.
Kimber L. Aug 25, 2009, 7:40pm EDT
This one made me smile Haim
Haim Kadman Aug 26, 2009, 12:23pm EDT
No wonder, thanks so much Kimber, I'm glad I've made you smile.
Kushal Poddar Aug 25, 2009, 10:19pm EDT
It is really you. The "I’ll review the situation" remains with me. The last line too. Sharp. Realistic.
Haim Kadman Aug 26, 2009, 12:24pm EDT
Well that's usually is the situation... Thanks dear Poddar.
Jennifer Lee Aug 26, 2009, 9:47am EDT
Well done, Haim. Thank you for posting to our group.
Haim Kadman Aug 26, 2009, 12:25pm EDT
Thanks Jennifer I love your poems.
Wilhelmine Estabrook Aug 27, 2009, 8:33am EDT
Yup. All life is a gamble. Pays yer money, takes yer chances.
Haim Kadman Aug 27, 2009, 12:55pm EDT
Right you're dear Wilhelmine.
Sheila Deeth Aug 28, 2009, 6:59pm EDT
Ah, very nice. The double-gamble there, and she's in charge.
Haim Kadman Aug 29, 2009, 11:04am EDT
Thanks so much Sheila.
David N. Sep 6, 2009, 12:38pm EDT
Alright, I need a driver...got the patience? I don't know, if your playing poker , you just have to hold up the dealer. good poem.
Haim Kadman Sep 6, 2009, 12:50pm EDT
Thanks so David I appreciate your sense of humor, a good one.

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