Take Flight

Comments: 54

Dawn (kitty on the wall) Aug 19, 2009, 2:07am EDT

dreamlike and beautiful! I love this =)

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Julie R. Aug 19, 2009, 2:07am EDT

This is truly a beautiful poem of love. Thank you for sharing.

Jennifer Lee Aug 19, 2009, 2:11am EDT

Thank you, Julie. Always good to hear from you, my friend.

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Dawn (kitty on the wall) Aug 19, 2009, 2:07am EDT

don't stop writing. I love your poetry

Jennifer Lee Aug 19, 2009, 2:10am EDT

Thank you, honey! I'm thinking of one to write for you about the Goddess of the Sea or bringing me light. I need to sleep on it. Goodnight, hugs.

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Shirley ♡ ☮ M. Aug 19, 2009, 2:18am EDT

That is a lovely poem. Thanks for sharing it.

Jennifer Lee Aug 19, 2009, 2:19am EDT

Thank you for reading, Shirley! Have a good night!

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Sidewinder 7 Aug 19, 2009, 2:42am EDT

A feathered woman gifted solace
to a deserted, yet deserving man.

This is great. Reminds me of someone I use to know.

Jennifer Lee Aug 19, 2009, 11:05am EDT

Thank you, Sidewinder. I hope you'll share your story with me.

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George Shaw Aug 19, 2009, 3:32am EDT

Very good, Jennifer.

Jennifer Lee Aug 19, 2009, 11:05am EDT

Good morning, George! Thank you.

George Shaw Aug 19, 2009, 11:47am EDT

Good morning. Are you still camping?

Jennifer Lee Aug 19, 2009, 11:50am EDT

No, I'm home now. I'll be leaving again on Monday. The contractor is going to replace my ceiling after a major plumbing leak. The insurance company is putting me up at The Marriott Residence Inn. :))

George Shaw Aug 19, 2009, 11:54am EDT

Bummer, but it could be much worse.
Take care.

Jennifer Lee Aug 19, 2009, 9:33pm EDT

Ya, they could make me go back to the campground. LOL Thanks, George. You, too.

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james laird Aug 19, 2009, 3:43am EDT

jen,this is a very beautiful poem thanks for writing it.You have brought a feeling of love and happiness into my heart.Everytime i see your smile or hear your voice my heart feels warmer and beats faster.love you hun.

Jennifer Lee Aug 19, 2009, 11:05am EDT

You're welcome, babe. Thank you.

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Melissa Underhill Aug 19, 2009, 7:07am EDT

Beautiful!

Jennifer Lee Aug 19, 2009, 11:06am EDT

Thank you, Melissa!

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Kushal Poddar Aug 19, 2009, 7:26am EDT

You yourself is a solace to any soul who searches it hard. Good poem.

weatherman’s

Jennifer Lee Aug 19, 2009, 11:06am EDT

Thank you, Kushal!

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JOHN BECK Aug 19, 2009, 8:50am EDT

Purely Jennifer honed to a keen edge.

Jennifer Lee Aug 19, 2009, 11:07am EDT

I'm working on dropping the fluff when I can per Corinna's advice. You should notice less articles at least. Thanks, John!

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Lisa Frost Aug 19, 2009, 10:19am EDT

Sweet and dream like!

Jennifer Lee Aug 19, 2009, 11:12am EDT

Thank you, Lisa!

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Stacey *Mamasaid* D. Aug 19, 2009, 10:21am EDT

Absolutely lovely love poem :)

Jennifer Lee Aug 19, 2009, 11:12am EDT

Good morning, Stacey! Thank you.

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Robert - just a simple man - B. Aug 19, 2009, 11:04am EDT

This writing is immaculate. But on a personal side posesses way too much introspection. Reminds me what I don't have, what I want; and it breaks my heart.

Jennifer Lee Aug 19, 2009, 11:13am EDT

Thank you for the praise, Robert! I'm sorry you haven't discovered this yet, but I know it will happen.

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Purrrrrrrrrrr~Genki dashite~Nantoka naru-yo! S. Aug 19, 2009, 11:54am EDT

surrealsweets~

Jennifer Lee Aug 19, 2009, 12:14pm EDT

Thanks, Purrty!

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Purrrrrrrrrrr~Genki dashite~Nantoka naru-yo! S. Aug 19, 2009, 11:54am EDT

Thanks for posting to GutterGirls~

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Kathryn E. Aug 19, 2009, 12:28pm EDT

the thing about love is that love truly is beautiful.

Jennifer Lee Aug 19, 2009, 12:38pm EDT

I concur, Kathryn. Thank you! :))

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Kathryn E. Aug 19, 2009, 12:28pm EDT

Featured in the Triple Name Club.

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Sharon P. Aug 19, 2009, 2:35pm EDT

Thats beautiful. I love it.

Jennifer Lee Aug 19, 2009, 4:11pm EDT

Thank you, Sharon! Have a good day!

Sharon P. Aug 19, 2009, 4:13pm EDT

Your welcome. You too.

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david f. Aug 19, 2009, 2:46pm EDT

whoosh - a lot of meaning in one word. beautifully written poem.

Jennifer Lee Aug 19, 2009, 2:51pm EDT

Hi David! Thank you so much! I like your icon. I have two dogs myself.

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Svetlana Goryacheva Aug 19, 2009, 3:12pm EDT

Just what I needed to read at the moment, darling - beautiful!!! :-)

Love and hugs - S.

Jennifer Lee Aug 19, 2009, 3:54pm EDT

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Love ya.

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Georgiana S. Aug 19, 2009, 6:38pm EDT

lovely, "...soar nevermore..."!

Jennifer Lee Aug 19, 2009, 6:58pm EDT

Thanks, Georgie!

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Dr. Ashok Saxena Aug 19, 2009, 7:03pm EDT

Deserted yet desreving is a nice use. a lovely poem

Jennifer Lee Aug 19, 2009, 9:28pm EDT

Thank you, Doc!

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Alison H. Aug 19, 2009, 9:12pm EDT

Lovely, romantic.....1 +1 can equal more than the sum of the numbers!

Jennifer Lee Aug 19, 2009, 9:29pm EDT

I concur, Alison. Thank you. I am looking for a photo essay about your camping trip. Will you be posting one?

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Lewis (keeping those fires burning) K. Aug 19, 2009, 9:21pm EDT

"Allowed them to soar to Nevermore"... actually sounds a bit tragic, if you think of 'nevermore' the way Poe did... Perhaps you're re-inventing the word? Lovely writing, I'm just thinking out loud...

Jennifer Lee Aug 19, 2009, 9:31pm EDT

I am glad you pointed that out. I think it should read forever more. I'm going to edit it somehow. Thanks, Lewis! That is why you're a great mentor. :))

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