July Moon - TSC

August 13, 2009 12:06 PM EDT

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July Moon - TSC

We sat under the stars,
soft blanket, two pillows,
as the July moon hung over the tree tops.
Talking softly, re-learning trust,
shared memories, love revisited,
becoming best friends all over again.

mn - 2009

The Sentence Prompt is:

"The July moon hung above the tree tops"

and I am very late submitting...

Tags: tsc, titled sentence prompt, late, life

To Groups: Grass Roots Writing, First Time Writers., Titled Sentence's Challenge

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Comments: 9

George Shaw Aug 13, 2009, 12:12pm EDT

Ah, this is more to my liking -- I usually have a romantic bent, and I like this.

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Marilyn is looking for whatever there is. N. Aug 13, 2009, 12:14pm EDT

Thanks, George, this means a lot, as I've read your writing and it's good! :)

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Dawn (kitty on the wall) Aug 13, 2009, 12:42pm EDT

a very lovely read my Kobi friend =)

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Donald M. Aug 13, 2009, 1:01pm EDT

That was wonderful Marilyn.

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William Dotani Aug 13, 2009, 1:48pm EDT

Your verse beautifully captures a pleasant sublime mood.

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Shaunee C. Aug 13, 2009, 4:33pm EDT

This is really nice

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Larry H. Aug 13, 2009, 8:58pm EDT

thanks for sharing

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Mustafa Demiri Aug 14, 2009, 12:55am EDT

This is truly lovely. I was just having a lovely conversation with my wife, earlier today, and it felt to me like the continuation of a conversation we had begun twelve years ago when we'd first met.

To the never-ending conversation!

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