
Silvery shadows cascade
on the moonlit water below
Heavenly memories ripple
As the shadows come and go.
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Elsie Duggan
Member since:
November 8, 2006 Silvery Shadows - Snippets - Day 3, for Snippets challenge
August 04, 2009 01:36 AM EDT
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Silvery shadows cascade on the moonlit water below Heavenly memories ripple As the shadows come and go.
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Comments: 28
May I suggest a change to L - 2? Instead of the words On the, I would replace with the word inside.
Just my opinion.
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Just lovely.
- Bobbi
I really enjoy these 'Snippets'
You do them so well.
This Snippet is a perfect "17" SILVERY~SHADOWS~Style Snippet, and has been entered into Our 2nd Snippets CHALLENGE on the topic of SHADOWS as your entry #3.
This Snippet is really beautifully written. WE are truly grateful for your presence here with us. Your Snippets are all very inspiring.
Snippets ~ "Where WE WRITE in "30" words or less, and delete the rest."