by Elsie Duggan
Member since:
November 8, 2006

Beloved Shadow - Snippet

August 02, 2009 02:21 PM EDT
views: 64 | rating: 10/10 (15 votes) | comments: 30

 

 

 

 

 

 

His shadow fell across her face

As he reached down to seek her lips

The thrill remains through all these years

Traced with her fingertips
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Comments: 30

Steph-in-NE ..... Aug 2, 2009, 2:32pm EDT
such a lovely snippet,, you do wonders
Simply beautiful, not only your words...but the image too. This is perfect for the challenge!
Melissa Underhill Aug 2, 2009, 2:34pm EDT
This was beautiful!
Ruthi C. Aug 2, 2009, 2:39pm EDT
Simply sweet!
tammy b. Aug 2, 2009, 2:42pm EDT
lovely
Beautiful
Karen E. Aug 2, 2009, 3:09pm EDT
Oh my, I am all a'flutter.
Janie E. Aug 2, 2009, 3:47pm EDT
Beautifully touching!
flit . Aug 2, 2009, 3:55pm EDT
perfect
Renita P. Aug 2, 2009, 5:45pm EDT
very nice
Stacey *Mamasaid* D. Aug 2, 2009, 7:31pm EDT
Beautiful!
lynn a. Aug 2, 2009, 7:35pm EDT
I'm at a loss for words. Elsie, this may be your very best.
Larry H. Aug 2, 2009, 7:39pm EDT
really nice.
Cheryl W. Aug 2, 2009, 7:47pm EDT
This is beautiful, Elsie.
Rose Lamatt Aug 2, 2009, 8:55pm EDT
Boy, you're good lady. Beautiful.

Donna C. Aug 2, 2009, 9:54pm EDT
Excellent!!
Dawn K. Aug 2, 2009, 9:57pm EDT
very lovely
William Dotani Aug 3, 2009, 3:15am EDT
Beautifully romantic.
Deb J. Aug 3, 2009, 9:11am EDT
This is really beautiful Elsie!! Good job!!!

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Jackie T. Aug 3, 2009, 10:50am EDT
Very nice...the pix nicely enhanced your snippet.
Kushal Poddar Aug 3, 2009, 11:09am EDT
This poem is beyond everything. It is as immortal as Rodin's sculptures.

shadowy
Marge H. Aug 3, 2009, 11:29am EDT
He was a very lucky man to have your love.
Bhawana 'Gather Proud Mom' Aug 3, 2009, 1:16pm EDT
fine snippet.truly lovable.
René Allen Aug 3, 2009, 10:34pm EDT
too much . . . a perfect "25" SHADOW~ACROSS~her~FACE~Style Snippet!

Elsie ~ This has been entered into Our 2nd Snippets CHALLENGE on the topic of SHADOWS as your 2nd entry, and is currently FEATURED in Snippets!

I'm loving your Snippets. It is obvious that you have perfected a style of writing that easily lays ground to whatsoever you focus on....

Can't wait to SEE the next one.

Snippets ~ "Where WE are in the midst of Our 2nd Snippets CHALLENGE on the topic of SHADOWS."

FOUR Snippets in FOUR Days.

Day 3
Elsie Duggan Aug 4, 2009, 12:42am EDT
Thank you so much Rene', I am enjoying this, take so little time, and so much fun and thank you for the feature, I am really thrilled. Elsie
René Allen Aug 5, 2009, 8:59pm EDT
I'm glad that you can feel the rhythm of Our Snippets Gather Group. You just flow right on in, and WE can't say that everyone is able to do that...but, WE, of course expected only the BEST when you came on the scene ~ and ~ I have to say, WE have not been disappointed at all.

HUGS for your INSPIRATIONAL, LOVING and ROMANTIC Snippets!

Now just WHO is able to turn SHADOWS into ROMANCE? Only Elsie. {smiles}.
t b. Aug 3, 2009, 11:32pm EDT
Lovely Elsie!
Lucky Stars Aug 4, 2009, 1:14am EDT
Sweet and to the point, Elsie with lingering memories.
Wilma M. Aug 5, 2009, 10:59am EDT
Beautiful description of the love you shared.
Sheila Deeth Aug 5, 2009, 11:35pm EDT
I missed this challenge. You hit it beautifully.

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