Out There

This is what happens when you have way too much on your mind, and you try to write, and listen to the Moody Blues....lol Enjoy if you can

Out There

Summer breezes tease my soul

Of loves that have yet to come

And dreams that have come and gone

Drifting by releasing my mind

For things yet to come

Watching clouds floating by

I know see why the past in the past

I hear the music in the air

As the trees bend and sway with the rhythm

Soft and free as a mountain stream

Flowing from the heart

Gently out to all

Bring forth the summer scents

Of flowers dancing into the night

Whispering its breath upon the midnight sun

Forever playing with the glowing stars

Tease my mind

Play upon my soul

Slide down the brightest rainbows

All while enjoying life’s greatest show.

Comments: 11

Kathryn E. Jul 24, 2009, 12:05pm EDT

Lovely....

Featured in the Triple Name Club.

♥~♥ Phaedra ♥~♥ .. Jul 24, 2009, 12:33pm EDT

Thank you Kathryn

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Robert - just a simple man - B. Jul 24, 2009, 12:29pm EDT

Very lovely indeed my friend. I had a lot of listening to Moody Blues in my past. Maybe, they'll be a little more Phaedra yet to come. It wouldn't be a bad thing.

Nice writing hon.

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Robert - just a simple man - B. Jul 24, 2009, 12:30pm EDT

Totally love the last few lines.

♥~♥ Phaedra ♥~♥ .. Jul 24, 2009, 12:33pm EDT

Thanks Robert, I don't know what came over me, I was just sitting there headphones all the way up, and started writing, I thinks its nice in a strange sort of way....you know you could put a few well place chorus' in the and it could be a new folk song..lol

Robert - just a simple man - B. Jul 24, 2009, 12:52pm EDT

That's what I was thinking (how you could have inserted a chorus). See we think alike.

I did some writing this morning. Four pieces between 8 and 9 with my cocoa puffs and strawberry waffles. I hope you'll visit them once they're posted: My Passing, The Snake, Run to Eden, and When we remember them (this one is in snippet form).

Give me a couple hours or so.

Robert - just a simple man - B. Jul 24, 2009, 12:53pm EDT

btw - missing you. would love to hear your voice sometimes.....

♥~♥ Phaedra ♥~♥ .. Jul 24, 2009, 1:22pm EDT

Sorry I've been busy, I am missing a friend the went to Az on business, and I have had a lot to do. I've put up 12 pints of BBQ sauce, 12 pints of apple butter, and 4 pints of blackberry vinegar. So much to do before winter, and still school starts in a week,and I have a few things being published over the next few months...busy...busy...busy.

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