Dueling Breakfast Haiku (Bad Poetry)

July 22, 2009 07:11 PM EDT (Updated: July 22, 2009 11:43 PM EDT)

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Breakfast Haiku #1

sausages sizzle

eggs yolks look with startled eyes

the breakfast beast lurks

Breakfast Haiku #2

pancakes lying down

maple syrup seeks repose

breakfast loves lazy

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Tags: haiku - can u, obtuse and abstruse, im a nimnal, pancake compressor, gather island, lefties are in their right mind, lyrical license, island silliness, good bad poetry

To Groups: Poetically Incorrect, Gather Island, Gathering In My Jammies, Breakfast Club

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Comments: 8

Purrrrrrrrrrr~Genki dashite~Nantoka naru-yo! S. Jul 22, 2009, 7:30pm EDT

*snickers* the eggs look like boobies =D
APPLAUSE~BRAVA
purrrfect

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JOHN BECK Jul 22, 2009, 10:16pm EDT

I'll see your eggs and pancakes and raise you fresh orange juice and sausage links.

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Tracy Fabre Jul 22, 2009, 11:06pm EDT

Ruh-roh, we got us two duels... dueling duels!

So simple a dish,
Southern perfection, no less:
Cheesy grits heaven.

Mark Jepsen Jul 22, 2009, 11:46pm EDT

Dueling duels! Which way do I turn when I have to turn and shoot? I'm confused. For all I know Cheney is hiding in the bushes somewhere as well!

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Mark Jepsen Jul 22, 2009, 11:44pm EDT

I had to make a correction. Somehow an extra syllable sneaked into the last line! Thankfully all is now in order.

Tracy Fabre Jul 23, 2009, 12:06am EDT

Glad you explained that. I came back to read your response to me and thought the last line was should be, not loves. Decided I was hallucinating.

(I might still be, but not about that.)

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