by penni d.
Member since:
September 12, 2007

* First Time*

July 17, 2009 10:58 PM EDT (Updated: July 17, 2009 11:02 PM EDT)
views: 80 | comments: 40

                                             Dark parking lot
                                      car seats pushed back
                                     rain pounding on the roof
                                     enclosed world, for two
                                                 private
                                             My hands full,
                                      I lick                 I suck
                                            Explosion!
                                     Hot, rich,  decandant!
                                       mouth filled,I lean
                                                and kiss
                                        thanks for the gift
                                                   You
                                    touch lips to   a perfect globe
                                              tenative
                                              seeking
                                   mouth moving      moving
                                             lips touching
                                            until finished
                                              exausted
                                     we never did it like this
                                           interesting
                                        How one can
                                    

                                    eat a hot fudge sundae
                               when they forgot the spoon
                                   he did a fast job on that
                                        vanilla cone too

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Comments: 40

penni d. Jul 17, 2009, 11:01pm EDT
With the temps in the high 90's, lack of a spoon wasn't gonna stop ME!
David W. Jul 17, 2009, 11:03pm EDT
You got me, I was looking for the flag and then I read the end. Great stuff. By the way, that's why we don't order ice creaam for take out in Boca.
penni d. Jul 17, 2009, 11:07pm EDT
Ha...I KNEW I would get Somebody, David! it's so Hot the sundae would have melted within 3 minutes. it went down cool, baby,cool! :)
JOHN BECK Jul 17, 2009, 11:09pm EDT
OK, Penni, I should know by now but you got me again!
penni d. Jul 17, 2009, 11:12pm EDT
Ah, HA!!!! ROFL
But at least the ice cream cooled me off................ :)
Barb (Gather Site Ferret) Carlson Jul 17, 2009, 11:12pm EDT
Got me, too, Penni. LOL! Now I want ice cream. Sigh.
penni d. Jul 17, 2009, 11:13pm EDT
Sorry, Barbara.... me tongue wouldn't quit till it was alllll gone :)
William Dotani Jul 17, 2009, 11:38pm EDT
You had my mind in the gutter until the last stanza.
penni d. Jul 17, 2009, 11:55pm EDT
I think I have been reading a lot of our t.b.,William....she does fasinating stuff,lol
William Dotani Jul 18, 2009, 12:04am EDT
Yes, she made me realize how Puritan I am.
penni d. Jul 18, 2009, 12:06am EDT
uh huh....sure, william,sure................:)
William Dotani Jul 18, 2009, 12:51pm EDT
She talks of things us genteel menfolk never discuss.
Lisa Frost Jul 18, 2009, 12:45am EDT
You got me there Penni. I have been reading too much from the new group of Jennifer Lee...LOL

I do think it is a lot of fun to eat ice cream. I have found that it can make some guys uncomfortable for some reason...hee hee
Jennifer Lee Jul 31, 2009, 6:51am EDT
LOL, Lisa!
Paidra Delayno Jul 18, 2009, 1:15am EDT
knowing what a stanch upright girl you are, penni, i immediately suspected it was something like this.
lynn a. Jul 18, 2009, 1:50am EDT
Penni, I just knew you were going to pull a fast one and you did. I'm sitting here laughing. Never thought of ice cream. This was funny and cute. You have a Wicked sense of humor.
Shannon H. Jul 18, 2009, 2:00am EDT
Now that's a sexy sundae! Great write you little trickster!
hawk d. Jul 18, 2009, 2:37am EDT
Found my password girlie. You are in trouble now!
Shells M. Jul 18, 2009, 8:04am EDT
That was great... You had me going... I see someone else from the hood above me will have to stop by and say HI to him tot...
Spencer T. Jul 18, 2009, 10:00am EDT
Perfect situation for slurping. Hmmm!
Danielle P. Jul 18, 2009, 10:16am EDT
I was wondering at first why you didn't flag this as an adult theme, now I know why. My mind was in the gutter, not yours. LOL Excellently done!!
penni d. Jul 19, 2009, 12:55am EDT
I can hardly believe the thing wasn'tflagged by a community "non-reader, danielle. Wow! :)
Kathy W. Jul 18, 2009, 12:17pm EDT
It's all about the caramel and the fudge.
You sneak! If I'd have known it was about ice cream at the beginning, I could have "digested" this with the real thing!
Wilka
Lisa Frost Jul 18, 2009, 12:26pm EDT
I sooo want some ice cream now too!! She is just evil..ROFL
penni d. Jul 18, 2009, 8:31pm EDT
((( Big grin)))
Donald M. Jul 18, 2009, 12:23pm EDT
[*laughing until I cry*] You really had me for a minute Penni, Thought I would need a shower, naturally when I got ice cream all over me. LOL.
Marge H. Jul 18, 2009, 3:07pm EDT
Whew! That's some hot ice cream. LOL
Rose H. Jul 19, 2009, 12:03am EDT
Why you are so cool Penni - ice cream won't even melt in your mouth:)
penni d. Jul 19, 2009, 12:54am EDT
(((snicker)))
Curt L. Jul 19, 2009, 1:26pm EDT
Wow! You got me good!
Great one, Penni!
t b. Jul 19, 2009, 8:13pm EDT
Yummy
penni d. Jul 19, 2009, 8:26pm EDT
ha ha...t.b. This was in honor of YOUR writing! :)
Daaaaaaaaamn woman ; - )
Jennifer Lee Jul 31, 2009, 6:52am EDT
The beginning was HOT! No need for a cold shower by the time I read the end. Great stuff, Penni.
Awesome~!
t b. Aug 4, 2009, 12:00am EDT
I'm still laughing, great touch Penni!
Missy Cline Aug 17, 2009, 8:04pm EDT
lol awesome!
Shelbia C. Aug 26, 2009, 9:41pm EDT
This was great! I loved it

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