by Sheila Deeth
Member since:
February 1, 2007

Eventide Love - for rainbow connections

July 16, 2009 05:52 PM EDT
views: 58 | rating: 9.9/10 (15 votes) | comments: 19

Red hair in the sunset’s orange glow

And moon’s pale snow is yellowed

By the haze over the green.

It’s growing dark my love. I’ve seen

The sky turn slow from blue to indigo

To violet, to mysteries of night.

But days are fire my love, and days are red

and waking in my bed my love’s delight.





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Comments: 19

love this !! thanks!
rainbows of smiles for u
Ruthi C. Jul 16, 2009, 6:34pm EDT
You've penned a rainbow - sweet!
Marge H. Jul 16, 2009, 7:04pm EDT
Beautiful imagery
Vivian A. Jul 16, 2009, 8:08pm EDT
Excellent observance of order in your ROY G BIV. Great poem Sheila.
A lovely rainbow eventide!
elizabeth e. Jul 16, 2009, 8:29pm EDT
....and then the rain came once more, creating more rainbows in the sky.
Angela A. Jul 16, 2009, 9:43pm EDT
I love the rainbow colors, it's so neat!
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
penni d. Jul 16, 2009, 10:11pm EDT
awesome words, great colors evoking the emotions...
Mustafa Demiri Jul 17, 2009, 1:51am EDT
This was an abosulte delight! So gentle and tender... truly lovely.
Kushal Poddar Jul 17, 2009, 7:11am EDT
Pure delight.


silence for God
Heidi S. Jul 17, 2009, 7:51am EDT
Wonderful idea - wonderfully written!
Haim Kadman Jul 17, 2009, 1:14pm EDT
Beautiful poetry and thoughts.
Angie O. Jul 17, 2009, 6:26pm EDT
Very Nice Rainbow Sheila
Sherrie H. Jul 18, 2009, 8:56am EDT
Thanks for posting this to Rainbow Connections - Colorful Competitions - it's perfect for this week's "Rainbow" theme!
Sherrie H. Jul 18, 2009, 8:56am EDT
This is wonderful, Sheila!
Lee P. Jul 19, 2009, 10:31pm EDT
Very nice. Very rainbowie. This is very nice.
Alison H. Jul 20, 2009, 5:40pm EDT
So lovely! The rainbow shades of love.
lynn a. Jul 22, 2009, 7:48am EDT
Getting steamy here. I do like it very, very much.
Wilma M. Aug 10, 2009, 11:35pm EDT
Lovely poem and so colorful!

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