Unravel

A flood of emotions fill the sky

during our first sunrise.

Warmth kisses my cheeks.

We create a new memory,

Two souls unite;

Yet come undone

Simultaneously

like unraveling knots.

To give yourself to me

means to release part of you.

Our hearts soar upon views

from atop the mountain.

We fly back to eternity.

Relieved that I'm home,

I slumber beside you

until snoring stirs me.

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George Shaw Jul 16, 2009, 4:57pm EDT

snoring There is always a serpent there someplace, eh.

Ferosh (Site Translator for LOLSPEAK)is O. Jul 16, 2009, 5:00pm EDT

Usually it's the 'serpent' knocking on the back door that wakes most of us women up.;)

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Ferosh (Site Translator for LOLSPEAK)is O. Jul 16, 2009, 4:59pm EDT

Like twin flames uniting, spiraling upward, feeding off each other, until they come to rest in the hot embers of slumber...... at least it wasn't a fart that woke you. lol

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George Shaw Jul 16, 2009, 5:14pm EDT

Oh! Oh!

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james laird Jul 16, 2009, 5:29pm EDT

i love that our hearts are soaring .xoxo

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Nancy Silveria Jul 16, 2009, 5:37pm EDT

I think the snoring is a great part. That's life, and that's beautiful. :)

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Howard b. Jul 16, 2009, 5:49pm EDT

A new memory. I like that. Snoring is a part of what makes life so good knowing someone is there. My wife says I snore. I stayed up one night to find out . For sure I didn't .lol You have a great night.

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Georgiana S. Jul 16, 2009, 6:34pm EDT

I didn't sleep when Gordon snored!

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Janie E. Jul 16, 2009, 6:36pm EDT

My hubby's snoring does more than stir me. It wakes me up!

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Joyce ("Site Cheshire Kitteh") L. Jul 16, 2009, 6:45pm EDT

A sock ending! lol!

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JOHN BECK Jul 16, 2009, 8:09pm EDT

"To give yourself to me

means to release part of you." I think that's brilliant! Then the last line's a hoot!

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Lisa Frost Jul 16, 2009, 8:53pm EDT

This is a beautiful joining of two.

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Chana M. Jul 16, 2009, 8:57pm EDT

Thank you for sharing this @ Art - Any Medium!

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Linda T. Jul 16, 2009, 11:08pm EDT

Two souls unite;

Yet come undone

Good description of the process of building a new relationship. There are moments when you become one but at the same time there is still a distance. Over time that distance becomes narrower.

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