Life! (For Wednesday Writing Essential)

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D.K. (a fly on the wall) Jul 12, 2009, 6:15am EDT

i love that, sun-kissed flowers...well done, very pretty. visually stimulating.

D.K. (a fly on the wall) Jul 12, 2009, 6:15am EDT

http://www.gather.com/viewArticle.jsp?articleId=281474977735190

you are my friend

Svetlana Goryacheva Jul 12, 2009, 6:19am EDT

Brilliant, my dear friend... the sensation is contagious indeed! :-)

Hugs and blessings - S.

Marilyn is looking for whatever there is. N. Jul 12, 2009, 6:35am EDT

Thank you, you wrote an amazing poem, which I read yesterday, Svetlana, so talented, and so very nice, as well as such a great friend.

Dawn,

I'm going to read right now :)

Connie C. Jul 12, 2009, 6:59am EDT

Wow! That was simply wonderful

Marilyn is looking for whatever there is. N. Jul 12, 2009, 7:06am EDT

Thanks, Connie, may I have some of your fried squash? LOL Please (pitiful look)

Kushal Poddar Jul 12, 2009, 7:33am EDT

The last sentence comes up, rises and spreads like an echo. Yes, this is a poignant poem.

hurt heart

Mary M. Jul 12, 2009, 7:35am EDT

Very inspiring on Sunday morning.

Marilyn is looking for whatever there is. N. Jul 12, 2009, 7:47am EDT

Thank you, Kushal and Mary..

elizabeth e. Jul 12, 2009, 8:44am EDT

What a positive outlook on life. Bravo.

☀ Aunt Shanny Jul 12, 2009, 10:52am EDT

Hello Life!

I love it!

Cheryl W. Jul 12, 2009, 10:57am EDT

Beautiful poem, Marilyn!

Lynn, whose writing motto is Tabula rasa - Caveat lector Jul 12, 2009, 12:41pm EDT

A nice big juicy Bronx Cheer, like only Archie Bunker could do, to the gray and the heaviness! A defiant enjoyment of all things good in life - in living color and 3-D! I read the reference to "I am Alive," and it rose this to even higher heights. Amen! No more gray! Thank you!

Lynn, whose writing motto is Tabula rasa - Caveat lector Jul 12, 2009, 12:42pm EDT

Oh! Guessing you figured out the prompts? (I knew you would, spectacularly.) lol

Donald M. Jul 12, 2009, 1:55pm EDT

Good work, I enjoyed it.

Larry H. Jul 12, 2009, 2:33pm EDT

thanks for sharing..

Rachel D. Jul 12, 2009, 9:25pm EDT

This is a very beautiful poem!

William Dotani Jul 14, 2009, 3:54am EDT

A nice positive unfolding. I like the pace and places where the flow stops because each time a key point is emphasized.

Purrrrrrrrrrr~Genki dashite~Nantoka naru-yo! S. Jul 16, 2009, 2:16pm EDT

lovely and light and so very beautiful~

Mustafa Demiri Jul 17, 2009, 10:24pm EDT

There are times like these in all of our lives, when we find the world and suddenly it is glorious again; especially after long periods of intense occupational devotions, the gray and busy bondage of our careers... These beautiful moments will slip by if we let them. This was an entirely lovely poem.

Val G. Jul 20, 2009, 3:26am EDT

great poem. i want to see ocean waves...i miss them.

Sheila Deeth Jul 22, 2009, 1:52am EDT

I love the images in this. Lovely piece.

Life! (For Wednesday Writing Essential)

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