Fire and Love
All that I am feeling
Has wrapped itself in you
Nothing is more revealing
That I could ever construe
Your touch starts a fire
Reaching deep into my soul
But was my undying love
A very welcomed goal
Whether or not it was
It is truly a wonder to be
Filled with such a passion
That you have given to me
I long to touch your heart
The way you have mastered mine
These feelings invoke a beauty
I never thought I would find
Please come to me again
Lend me your passion and strength
Filling up my darkest nights
Making love to you at length
Give me some more time
In our incredible love song
The fire of our harmony
Making our love grow strong.
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Comments: 31
This is beautiful and romantic, Lisa. Love it!
Thank you so much Cheryl
Very nice great words
Thank you Shaunee
we can see that Your muse has not run off, lisa, as mine has...lol
Actually the distance from my muse is feeling unbearable lately...such is life I guess...
lovely words...it's nice to have a muse isn't it? :) love is wonderful.
**hugs**
Having a muse is truly a wonderful feeling.
indeed a 10 from me
An young poetess of india Toru Dutt wrote Peace is but a wandering fire si ilke ur love and fire
Thank you, it is always good to 'see' you on my writing. I am honored by the comparison!
Beautifull. The personification is very well done.
Irony etc.
Thank you sir!! THe personification was easy...LOL
You might look around Gather a little more then Tony, there are still a few of us "old fashion" types out there.
LOL, that is cute! I love it!
yes, your muse is live and well Lisa........
this is so you......
straight from the heart.....
beautiful writing ladyluna.............
Thank you very much Randee!!
You are so sweet! Oops, I wasn't supposed to say that out loud, was I? LOL
Sensual and well done, thank you.
Thank you Jennifer!
Wonderful song of closeness, Lisa.
Thank you John!
Beautiful Lisa. Nicely done.
Thank you Jennifer!
Well done
Thank you Kathryn, for the comment and the Feature!
Featured in the Triple Name Club.
Beautiful poem with such deep emotions.
I would normally be having great comments. But, I'm bone tired. So, here's this instead,
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
So heartfelt and sincere. The positive energy it gives off is considerable. Thanks for sharing with The Poet's Circle.