JOHN THE SUPER
©2009 by David Wainland
The darkness of the labyrinth was overwhelming. Grey light of a cloud-covered day barely penetrated the small dirty windows. Instead of relief, the windows that were barely level with the concrete sidewalks, poured fear onto the cement floor. There was no easing in the dull radiance of an obscured sun. Only shadows of things that might be.
Mysterious corridors rambled off in every direction with no apparent purpose. I felt the walls closing in on me and I grasped the pearl handled, chrome pistol tightly in a sweat cover fist.
This was not my first trip into the bowels of the building, but for all of the fear I felt, it would certainly be my last. Two adversaries, also armed with guns, lurked somewhere ahead of me and the only proof I had that they passed this way were the clouds of coal dust that wafted through the mildewed halls. One wrong turn and they would be upon me.
Outmanned and outgunned I forced my unwilling legs forward, certain doom lurking behind every cobweb in the dark.
I sensed more than heard movement behind me and I turned slowly with my back to the only door in view.
Out of the ashes, a giant figure emerged, black as night, waves of ash playing across his face, shovel raised high. I froze, leaden of leg, powerless to run, knowing my chrome pistol was of no use.
"You kids, playing guns in the cellar again? I told you this ain't no place for you. You get your butts out of here before I tells your parents."
The spell broke and I headed for the doorway and the steps up, followed by a hysterically laughing, Michael and Ira, cap guns blazing away, leaving the sulfurous aroma of black cap powder to mingle with the smell of putrefied garbage, black coal and stale air.
John's resounding belly laugh followed us and I could only imagine the matching toothy smile that would be emanating from his friendly broad face.
"He scared the piss out of you, didn't he David? I'll bet you wet your pants," said Ira.
Safe on the rain slicked street level I felt my confidence returning.
"I didn't see you guys standing still, he scared you as much as me."
"Yeah, well, I'm gonna get my dad. He'll beat the hell out of John. No super is gonna chaise me."
Michael was always threatening to call his dad, but he never did. His old man would have clipped him one for being there. Adults did not stand up for kids, not even to a colored superintendent. Besides, John was a good guy. Everybody in the building liked him, so they allowed him to get away with a lot of stuff. In addition, the tenants were not willing to sacrifice a good super for the honor of some spoiled kids. Good superintendents were hard to come by especially during the war years and for a couple of years after. There was a shortage of men and everybody was willing to make exceptions.
This mass of muscle, bone and fat shoveled coal into the furnace, carried barrels of ash to the curb, repaired door locks, changed bulbs, swept hallways, fixed toilets, raised and lowered dumbwaiters and carried garbage to the street. In the winters he stoked more coal, shoveled snow, poured ash on the ice and helped the tenants un-bury their cars.
I do not know what John was paid, but I am sure it was not enough. He slept in a single room next to the furnace and was available twenty-four seven. If it was cold, we banged on the pipes and radiators at all times of day and night. He strung cloth lines and hung sneak TV antennas so those of us that could afford the luxury would be able to watch.
Of all the things he did, my favorite was for the kids on the hot summer days in the Bronx. When the temperature climbed to unbearable, fans positioned behind blocks of ice no longer worked and people slept on fire escapes, out came John. He would arm himself with the biggest Stillson wrench I have ever seen. In the bright heat of a humid hazy sky, he would release the valve on the neighborhood fire hydrant and we played from dusk until dawn.
Half-naked children ran through the foaming torrent while grownups dipped their bare feet into a refreshing gutter river. Women in folding chairs lining the sidewalks leaned forward to dampen handkerchiefs and laughed as the charm of a Bronx summer lingered in the air.
When the city workers came to close it down John would disappear and reemerge minutes after they left, wrench on shoulder and a smile on his face. The rapids would flow and the world was pure once again.
He stood to the side, unacknowledged and unappreciated, but you could tell that this big man enjoyed every moment.
In a different time he might have been a hero. In those days he was simply, "John the Super."




Comments: 36
Just wonderful, David. I grew up in a world where buildings with supers seemed exotic and foreign. I guess that sense still lingers. Your post both supports the old illustion and sheds just enough light into that particular world to make me feel like stepping in for a spell. Nicely done, as always.
Ah yes, the catacombs of an apartment building were mysterious and daunting to a ten year old. Ghoulies and ghosties lived there. It was an exotic local, suitable for all kinds of evil tales.
LOL! This brought images to mind of prior supers I've had. Why are they always so dark and unfriendly seeming?
Not my John, buthe super that caame next, Steve, well tha's another story. A dark one for me.
What a refreshing story! I was in it from moment to moment.
Thanks for posting to my group, Anythingwriting
I could not ask for more.
Great and so well written, you do grip us dear David with a tense beginning that turns in such a swift pace into a humourous tale - chapeau!
I was hoping I didn't fall flat. Thanks for the gracious comment.
Cheers for those like John, and to you for telling his story.
yes, let's drink to all the non-hero heroes in the world. Here's to you John teh Super!
Great story told sharing the perspective from a child's point of view! :)
a good story
Thank you Karl. A compliment form you is always appreciated.
Nicely done, David. At first I thought this was a scene from one of your mystery tales, but you kind of gave it away in your title. :-) Although I never lived in a building with a super, I'm familiar with the scenes you described, especially the fire hydrant coolings on a "dog day afternoon" in the distant past, in Da Bronx!
Yup, the title leaked, but then, that's what I wanted from it.
Suspence, two dollars.
Real life experience, priceless.
You never write unreal.This was a finest story.
This is really well told. It captivates and keeps us within its world.
A world with attitude
very well done.... I'm sure he would be honoured to be the subject of your story
Thank you, it was my honor to write about him.
Great story, David.
You could have titled this "John, The Super Super". :)
Imagine how many people did and still do back-breaking work for little pay and live in the background of life, as if they were only meant to serve others, not deserving of a life of their own. Anyone who can do that and still find it in their heart to be kind to others certainly is super.
It sounds like you had a wonderful "Super"! It's nice to have someone who cares about the kids. Wonderful story, David.
I love this peek into a different world. You really bring it to life.
Sheila thankyou. I consider this high praise.
You are a masterful writer. No matter what tale you spin the reader is always pulled into its time and place to live it with you.
Thanks. Are you the Barbara H. that was in Gather before?
How cool it must have been to have a super! We only had a skinny old landlord who was hungry for the rent check!