An attempt at Haiku

The verse is quite good.  You have your numbers backwards though.  It is usually 5/7/5.  Still I like what you have written.  I am giving you a 10.

Thank you very much, Shelbia! I am pleased you liked it anyway.

a welcome addition to the type, Shannon. all the necessaries are there.

i like it short and to the point a ten for you

Wonderful description of the subject...Good job!

 As one of your biggest fans, I say it is great when one trys something new    yay!
:)

Hey Shannon, it's very nice. I've never attempted one of these as it would probably take me years to figure out.

its very nice

I'm giving you a 10.  It definitely brought a "visual" to me when I read it.  I had a difficult time figuring out Haiku, but have finally been able to work it.  Welcome to Gather.

I like it.  :)

pretty~ =)

Thank you for posting to GutterGirls~

Very nice

evokes a feeling of the mist...

nice work

relaxing

blissful

:)

This is very nice!

I like it!

Nice job with the Haiku. I find them very difficult to write, mainly because I love the use of words, and excess. LOl

It GLOWS !!!

great dear!  :)

Now that I no longer work for an airline, I like anything that deals with fog. lol

This is a nice verse; it tells much in those three lines.

i don't know much about haiku but i know that i love this.  i could feel and see it!!  it's beautiful!!!

xoxo
nina

fog slowly sneaks in
wetting the night's brightness
refraction light glows

reedited .good thought in simple and smart format.kudos

I liked that a lot!

How the hell did I miss this?!?!Q?!?!?!?!!?

You rock.:)