i wake up
in triumph; conquering
the dead of winter...
swimming in the pristine
waters of great joy
behold the yellow moon
in the sweetest moment of passion
nourishing the soul...
her delicate light
liberates my consciousness;
permeating the whole
spectrum of my being under the
watchful eyes of Venus
like an angel from the
blue, she comes in all her glory...
bearing the divine nectar
i see true love in her
limpid eyes of bliss; drinking from
the sweet wells of beauty
sublime; watching as her divine
presence dissolves in my naked soul
she sails through my
veins like a ship upon the secret
river of time; chanting love!
now, I can feel the
soothing rhythm of her heartbeat as
she savours the moment...
singing the divine melody in the
wondrous bed of a thousand lights
soulful dance of oneness...
what a stellar trajectory of love in
the moment of desire?
© Lawrence U.
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thank you for feeding me exquisite pearls of beuty~ =)
ooh! i love listening to the rhythm of someone's heartbeat. very well done :)
10 my friend!
It is excellent as usual Lawrence! Just sings to the soul!
This is beautiful
oh this was just so beautiful Lawrence!
Desires can take us anywhere.This is a beautiful composition,Lawrence and visual,sensory details are excellent...
my yummy#10
Very nice work
With the winter Moon and Venus joining in the chorus, delight stipples from sharing your "stellar trajectory", meteor like.
Your creation offers a certain zesty zeal; this "wondrous bed of a thousand lights", and is featured at The Surreal Circus
...and it's winter now where you are
beautifully done!
another great post
Delightfully and tastefully sensual. This epitomizes everything a romantic erotic poem should be in one beautiful package. Thank you for posting to the Poet's Circle. You are now featured.
So very rich and lovely!
Absolutely beautiful and lyrical. I particularly liked imagery such as:
veins like a ship upon the secret
river of time
Very evocative and focused writing. In rich, elegant language, you depict passions so fine that they are spiritual. Thanks for sharing with The Poet's Circle.
They was wonderful
Beautiful.
Captivating, Lawrence, just captivating!
I am so thilled yet to read another one of your outstanding poems. Thank you for blessing us with your talent.
thanks
The first two stanza felt like you are setting the stage to put the spotlight on the woman you adore as your essence beginning with the third stanza. This is lovely gentle descriptions of her magical charms.
My. you do love that woman, Lawrence.
Enchantingly done.
beautiful poem!
Absolutely Awesome! Thank you for the warm fuzzy my friend!
Lawrence, you never cease to amaze me - another awesome poem! In light of my love affair with the Moon, this really touched my soul.
Celestially sublime!
Thank you so much, Lawrence!
After rereading, I found this fantastic deep spiritual metaphor.
her delicate light
liberates my consciousness;
I'm so glad to have reread this because of these previously unnoticed lines. Bravo!!!
Excellent, dear Lawrence! :-)
Blessings and best wishes - S.
Lawrence, the scope of your poetry is ever-widening. The object of your love and desire is both human and divine.
rythmic and lovely.
xo