"Search me"

Search me
so that you can find fault
and feel good about yourself
relish in yourself
and boast
Ha!
you see
this
you see
that
and as you search me
is there a place
wherein
you find yourself?
Look a little harder
until you find "you"
in "me"
in some shape or form
And when you do
then "WE" can reach an
UNDERSTANDING
And you'll feel
the better for it
and I shall be
RELEASED
to just BE ME
without you
meddling in my affairs
raising needless cares
in the hearts and minds
of others
So search me
today
and forever
It will give
you something to do
While I continue to BE
"me"
and you continue to BE
"you".
by René Allen
Copyright © 2009 ~ René Allen ~ all rights reserved


Comments: 63
very nice
i love it. i'll continue to be me :)
{Smiles} ~ Thank you Carol and Dawn for reading and commenting.
This speaks to me of both our individuality as well as our interconnectedness. Thank you for posting to our group. You're such a talent and I'm lucky to have you share.
Ah ~ Thank you much Jennifer. You'll know I'll continue to post to the Poet's Circle. Now that I'm back to writing poetic works ~ L O L.
Pondering that... Rene, just to know you is to know the very gentle support that you give to others and the great care that you extend to to those who are in your groups. It is something that always warms my heart. When I read your comments, I am lifted and so if I search you, I find great beauty and love.
Karen ~ I thank you very much. Your caring and your COMPASSION SHINE THROUGH in everything you do. You too are such a supportive person ~ probably much more than you give yourself credit for.
Sometimes, I have to remind myself not to be so hard on people that I wish would just straighten up. You know how you can SEE the POTENTIAL in someone, and they just refuse to get with the program? There are so many out there like that. Then you have those who are giving their ALL, and they get mowed down by lesser~minded, lesser~spirited petty folks that know not what they do.
So, I've come to understand that when you meet someone with a spirit that is genuine, and you can "feel" it, "relate" to it, and "embrace" it, you should be ever so grateful. That such person is YOU Karen.
Thank you ~ thank you for being my "friend".
Rene
How that lifted me this afternoon Rene.
Hi Karen ~ I'm glad to hear this, because you should be uplifted every day!
I like it
I'm glad Ellen ~ THANKS.
Amazing...I so know that mingling of two souls that can get weighty at times and you can lose yourself unless you stake that claim and set yourself free. Lovely words, Rene...
Patricia ~ I like the way you have put this into prospective . . .
"I so know that mingling of two souls that can get weighty at times and you can lose yourself unless you stake that claim and set yourself free." ~ Patricia F.
TRUE, TRUE, TRUE.
Such witty irony, it's lovely dear Rene' - you should publish it, or was it already published?
Hi Haim ~ I am always, for some reason, so ... can't find the words ...
Okay, let's say this ~ I'm always asked to WRITE. I LOVE to WRITE. I find WRITING to be very realaxing and comforting. I also think that God has "gifted" me with the ability to WRITE ~ and in many cases, I WRITE WELL. {I'm not bragging on myself either}. I just find that sometimes I pick up some of my writings and am AMAZED at the words. I KNOW that they did not come from little ol me. And, I also know that every time someone asks me a question like the one you just asked (which happens all the time), . . it is my cue to PAY ATTENTION.
One thing I think that EVERYONE should bear in mind ~ whenever you keep hearing the same things over and over, you need to PAY ATTENTION. When you are asked about something ~ to do something ~ over, and over . . . it is no doubt your "gift" to the world, and what you have been "called" to do.
The two things I am always asked to do is WRITE and SPEAK in various forms.
This one is in a COLLECTION that I've been asked to write so much that I don't know if I'll ever finish. This one, and many others, will be released in a BOOK soon!
Thank you for your kind words.
It's excellent and should be published and the best of luck dear Rene'.
Live and let live is still a great idea.
Yes! Great idea!
Smiling . . . Leo and Joyce ~ THANK YOU.
"Live and Let Live is STILL a GREAT IDEA." ~ Leo
I'll remember the saying Leo.
I especially like what this one says. It is very well written.
Thanks MUCH Shelbia ~ I'll be over to read some of your poetic works this week!
Nice... an eloquent way of saying, "If you spot it, you've got it." I like to remind myself of this when I find myself in a judgemental frame of mind. More often than not, I can find elements of the same thing I'm judging in myself. And ironically, the things that bring out the strongest judgements in me are the ones that are most likely to be hidden away in my own character... the parts that I wish I could eradicate.
Basia ~ I love that line you've shared with us . . . "If you spot it, you've got it." ~ Basia
If that isn't the TRUTH! And you are so right about giving ourselves gentle reminders when we find ourselves in a "judgemental frame of mind."
I think WE can all relate to these words that you've shared with us . . .
"More often than not, I can find elements of the same thing I'm judging in myself. And ironically, the things that bring out the strongest judgements in me are the ones that are most likely to be hidden away in my own character... the parts that I wish I could eradicate." ~ Basia
Thank you for adding in your insightful thoughts.
... it is true ... we can see ourselves in others eyes.
"ditto . . . ditto" c.l. mareydt to what you have said. That is the reason why ALL who come before us ~ come before us . . . So that WE may "check" ouselves. The people before us serve as a mirror of sorts. And, as we stand before the mirrors of others, we do adjustments ~ fixes so to speak. And, if we are WISE, we UNDERSTAND all the imperfections and the VALUE that they have. The judgements that we make are usually only for ourselves, and only about ourselves ~ even when we don't think so.
Thank you very much for stopping by!
... have been 'cleaning' thru my friends list & goup lists ... had too many to really keep up with & so i have decided to narrow both of the groups down to a managable number to become better acquainted with the friends that i share with here in gatherland ...
hence i will hopefully be stopping by your posts more often as my time alllows. i enjoy your work, talent, & contributions here! live well, be well, & do well. be the change you want to see in the world, today! thanks Rene Allen!
Good to hear from you c.i. ~ You've mentioned your list of "friends" & "Group Lists" . . . I hope none of them included anybody destined for GREATNESS . . .
My list of "friends" is small here on Gather compared to the REAL REALM of things so to speak. I understand what you mean. My "friends" hear from me all the time ~ maybe too much if they'd tell it ~ ahahah! But then, I'm a "people" person.
Listening to what you've said, I do hope to have you stop by and find the time to keep up with your smaller list of "friends". I'll make a firm note of your advice, and as I continue to "BE", I hope I'll be a part of your "friends" list so that you may "SEE" the "change" . . . L O L... thank you for your kind words.
Wow, Rene. This piece is powerful and very strong. I read it aloud the second time; it flows with a lot of emotion.
Hi Carrie ~ Thanks for the second read. This was written for many of my "friends" here in Gatherland who are constantly JUDGED by others by those who give no thought to their own behavior patterns.
Thanks again for your comments!
strong~introspective~thoughtful~never loose you~you are all you have~ =)
Thank you for commenting Genki. I hope that you will share here what your name represents. I'm truly CURIOUS about it...
=)~I will bend my knees into a lotus and ask my goddess if I should give it up~ ;)
Well. . . what's the answer?
I love that you beg this person to search you to find themselves for understanding between you both, yet the whip at the end tells me you expect you to be you, and them to be them, and nothing will ever change... I loved it because that's how I would see the same situation. I would hope dearly for some peace on the matter, but I woudn't hold my breath. :)
Oh aren't you in the square of my mind ~ the piece that creates Ferosh! We're SEEing EYE to EYE on this one Ferosh. Thank you so much for adding your words in response to "Search me.", because I could not have summed this up better!
HUGS ~ Your Friend, Rene
:) Hugs backatcha... thank you for reconnizin'.... hehehe. I'm glad we see EYE to EYE here..... and pretty much every other post where we piggyback comment, so everyone else can see we're EYE to EYE! ;)
It's amazing isn't it Ferosh ~ L O L... I'm "feelin' ya!"
You put it brilliantly, dear Rene... :-)
Hugs and blessings - S.
Thank you much Svetlana my friend. I appreciate your Read and your comments.
On second thought, it might not be so bad.
Just continue to be "you" Terry! HUGS.
I enjoyed the input you've shared with us, and the PSALM. Thank you.
REMEMBERING ALWAYS that ~ "He who leans on, trusts in, and is confident of his own mind and heart is a [self-confident] fool, but he who walks in skillful and godly Wisdom shall be delivered. ~ PROVERBS 28:26 ~ AMPLIFIED VERSION
Your Friend,
Rene
Many times those who "chip away at others" are jealous, envious, or they just have hateful hearts. There are so many who despise those that DO GOOD....those that LIVE WELL....those that have many FRIENDS....those that are LOVED by others.
FAULT FINDERS primarily feast upon pointing out the wrongs, without any discourse concerning RESOLUTION. They see no resolutions, because they want no corrections. ABUSE has many forms that it takes. Recognizing the root of why people become abusive to other people usually points to un~healed hurts. They may not even recognize WHY they are so HATEFUL, or BITTER, or RESENTFUL -- they just know that they are, and they lash out at anyone who just happens to cross their path when they are having these tormenting thoughts.
Arduinna, your words are worthy of NOTE: "It reminds me to be careful not to loose myself to the likes of those that would chip me away till there's nothing left." ~ Arduinna Hunter
WISDOM comes from discerning the thoughts and intents of the hearts of those with whom you have contact. And, WE KNOW that the ULTIMATE SOURCE of ALL WISDOM is God, Who gives freely to ALL who ASK of HIM.
A PROTECTIVE COVERING means that some people will be moved out of your life that seek to harm you or hurt you in any way (without any effort on your part). God is able to do just that, and DOES.
Thank you so much for giving me more to think on Arduinna.
Always smiles for you Cassandra ~ HUGS!
and a humble "thank you."
{Wish you'd give us more of your DREAMS ~ Dream Depths!}
I appreciate your reading and commenting on my work.
HUGS & MUCH APPRECIATION for the "gifts" you bring by way of KNOWLEDGE.
Your Friend,
Rene
Your Friend,
René
It will be FEATURED in Artistic Therapy.
HUGS ~
Your Friend,
Rene
Thank you. This poetic piece is for EVERYONE. Because, at some time or another, each and everyone of us gets scrutinized, judged, and misjudged by family, friends, associates, and even complete strangers.
WE are ALL mirrors for one another's VIEWING PLEASURE. Whenever something is reflected in someone else that a person does not like, if it cannot be attributed to "jealousy" or "envy" or "hate", it is PROJECTION.
The FAULT FINDERS ~ CRITICAL MINDERS ~ unhappy souls and BUSY BODIES of the world will forever find something to do... even if it involves tearing down me or you.
Have a BLESSED DAY! Lots of LOVE to you Lisa ~ And again, THANKS!